| Title: And the Truth Shall Set You Free
| 26 Apr 2021 4:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Noooo that can't be it. what's on the paper? Must be some sort of legal doc saying he *has* to share custody with sirius right else he could easily take over and decide to keep harry to himself though I doubt hes thought that out
| Title: Changed Perceptions
| 01 Apr 2015 9:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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| Title: Where is Home?
| 01 Apr 2015 8:42 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely characterisation of all the characters thank you
| Title: In the Dark of Night
| 01 Apr 2015 8:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A great start I love your Severus all mean and moody!
Wow. First day with Snape and Harry is already sneaking out. I wouldn't have thought that he would have the energy for that. Snape will not be pleased.
Author's Response: Yeah, if he gets caught...it will not be pretty.
I like your Snape. I can imagine him saying those lines. And he managed to keep up his mask of indifference through his concern.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you. I like a cranky Snape! lol
weeeeeeeeeee. Silly Harry
I know I shouldn't. Really, I oughtn't. Regardless, I am cracking up over here at poor Sev and Sirius' expense. :P
Thoroughly enjoyable. Lacking a vital Next button, though. I think I'll survive. ...for now.
Aw... you dedicated a chapter to me? Now, I feel awful for not having read it right away. :P
That said--evil cliffhanger! That, right there, could have killed me. At present, it merely contributing to my staying up waaaay past my bedtime.
Excellently writ.
Ah, the horrors of a hospital gown. Apparently one can't even escape them in the wizarding world. I guess that some things are universal. Severus was nicely in character but I enjoyed seeing him struggle with doubts about taking in Harry. Still his misconceptions have been shaken so eventually he will come to see the real Harry.
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