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Title: Bells and Whistles 15 Jul 2011 9:02 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape on the other hand, looked like he was enjoying himself, Harry chuckled to himself, as he stalked from one end of the platform, to the other, robes billowing and rising as he barked at students to get a move on and docked points, with malicious glee.

    That part made me laugh - I could almost see it! ^^

    Poor Harry, though. At least Snape was understanding.

    Author's Response:

    Gotta love bat-like Snape, don't you?

     

    Never thought that Snape would be described as "understanding"!  Thanks for reading.

Title: Bells and Whistles 14 Dec 2009 12:37 am
Reviewer: Gaah (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I want to know more!!! why is it that every fic I read the last chapter is never enough to satisfy my curiosity XD please update :D

    Author's Response: Aw, sorry. I'm working on it now! I've had a little bit of writer's block, and was busy with the fest story, but I think that I'm over my little problem.
Title: Bells and Whistles 22 Nov 2009 3:06 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story! I'm seriously loving the interactions between Severus and Harry and am waiting breathlessly to find out what is in that box. I have a feeling it has to do with Harry's paternity. :D

    Author's Response:

    Oh, thank you so much.  Yeah, the box....you could be right!

     

    Welcome to P & S Silversargirl, and thanks for your nice review.

Title: Bells and Whistles 04 Nov 2009 6:28 pm
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    "Snape on the other hand, looked like he was enjoying himself, Harry chuckled to himself, as he stalked from one end of the platform, to the other, robes billowing and rising as he barked at students to get a move on and docked points, with malicious glee."- XD HAHAHA! That was probably my favorite line here. Classic Snape! ^-^

    Okay, so now we have Professor Lupin added to the mix. Yay! And poor Harry fainting from Dementors. I've only fainted once when I was really sick, but I think I might have if faced with a Dementor *shivers* They remind me of RingWraiths form LOTR and they're creepy too!

    But it's going to be interesting with Lupin AND Snape wanting to watch out for Harry, and now Harry kinda knows Snape care for him (somewhat) and even saw him get mad at Draco.

    Ooo! I can't wait for the next chapter!I'm sorry I was so behind, but the past few weeks and all have been hard. But I really loved this and I hope you get better soon Pandora!!!!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Ivy. I love Snape, and yeah that's a typical behaviour that we can imagine Snape doing.

    Yeah, Lupin is in the mix now, and it should be interesting to see how Snape and him will interact with regards to Harry.  Harry always has been affected by Dementors throughout Canon, and book 3 sets the stage for that, doesn't it?  They ARE pretty creepy, aren't they?

     

    Thanks Ivy, and I really really really enjoyed your last chappie too, and I can't wait for more.  

     

    Oh and thanks. I'm tired of being sick. I've been off of work for a couple of days now, and my boss told me to take tomorrow off too, when he heard me coughing. I hate staying home. I get bored.  But then again....I do have to finish up my fest story, so I can have more time to write.

Title: Bells and Whistles 25 Oct 2009 7:15 pm
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear. You start off with a sentence about Snape that almost made me spit out my hot apple cider! Ha!

    YAY! LUPIN! I love Lupin! "You don't think that he's died, do you?" Ron cracks me up in your story! I love your writing of Ron. (Hope that when I get to Ron, I can write him even half as well as you can.)

    Ooh, Lupin with fire in his hands! Cool! No lumos charm for you, Lupin! You play with fire! *growl*

    "I didn't poison the chocolate you know." Lupin...I just love Lupin. Him and his...*cough* monthly-cycle chocolate therapy.

    Like Lupin watching Snape interact with Harry curiously. Perceptive little bugger, isn't he?

    "or even Invisibility Cloaks!" I burst out laughing there. Yeah, they're all onto Harry's schemes. Do they have a checklist or something? Ways that Harry Potter Sneaks Around and how to Prohibit them. Poor Harry.

    WHOA! ANd now we have Dumbledore named as executor of the Potter home!? Oh my gosh! This is very exciting! I am so curious about this will...so curious.

    Author's Response:

    Oh well, I really can't take credit for those lines, as they were JK's ideas. I only added on to the dialogue, or changed it around a bit.

     The fire was JK's idea, but I wrote the thing abot it peeking through his fingers, because I thought that it was cool too, and I was imagining it in my mind.

     Poor Harry indeed. I think that he is going to have a hard time sneaking around with both Dumbledore and Snape watching his back.

     

    I hope that I can write the rest of the story to live up to that excitement!!  Thanks, some answers will be answered....eventually. (Evil, aren't I?)

Title: Bells and Whistles 25 Oct 2009 12:00 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. Not much to look forward to in this, his third year. Or so he thinks. Little does he know the surprises that are in store for him. I wonder how Harry is going to react to not being James Potter's son in this story. Can't wait to fins out.

    So, DD will enter the fray soon? Cool!

    Lesley~

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, Harry is not a happy campter. His third year is going to shake his world,  but then again, maybe he'll end up having more than he bargained for.  Harry is still very young in this, so of course he is not going to react well; not well at all. But then again...Snape has been softening up a bit towards him--but that may not be enough.

     

    Yeah Dumbles will be on the job soon.

     

    Oh, and Lesley...I wrote a little Halloween story that was inspired by your little Bonnie, and is dedicated to YOU!!!

Title: Bells and Whistles 25 Oct 2009 9:00 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, so my suspicion might be really farfetched, but here's what I'm thinking. You said you twisted the dialogue and descriptions and I noticed that your Lupin has dark hair and pale skin. Could it possibly be Sirius disguised as Lupin on the train? After all, he did handle the situation on the train a bit differently and he seems to look more like Sirius (I'm pretty sure Lupin was always described in the book as having light hair). Like I said, this is probably me just reading way too far between the lines, but I think it would be pretty cool if I was right.

    Anyway, hooray for Dumbledore maybe being able to change the conditions of the inheritance? I hope Sev and Harry find out the truth soon! Nice work--I hope to read more soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Well, I'll tell you that if I wasn't planning on that, I just might now!!! It is a really cool idea. You are brilliant, my girl.

    Well...I'm not sure that even Dumbledore can work magic here, but perhaps Dumbles can find a loophole to this, or find another solution!!

     

    Thanks PG!!

Title: Bells and Whistles 24 Oct 2009 10:45 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey, Pandora! Another wonderful chapter...don't you dare even think about giving up on this fantastic story!

    I always enjoy seeing Harry with Ron and Hermione and their interactions. Despite all of Harry's troubles, he is blessed to have such loyal and loving friends. And it's good to see Remus being introduced too.

    That scene with the dementor still gives me chills. They truly are awful creatures, the stuff of nightmares.

    I love seeing the little clues as to how Severus is slowly changing towards Harry, how he wouldn't let Draco bully him and took care of him once they were at Hogwarts. If you include the scene where Draco dresses up as a dementor to attempt to make Harry fall off his broom, I wonder how your Severus would react to that. I can't imagine him taking it lightly!

    And now they're bringing Dumbledore into the mystery with the box and the vault and the will. If anyone can solve it, he can!

    Awesome job again!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you Kristeh.  Oh, yes M'am!  I wouldn't dare stop writing, otherwise you might box my ears!  How about you? I'm anxiously awaiting a chappie for you too young lady!  I'm dying to read more of Slave Child.

     

    I love Harry and Ron with Harry too. They really do care about him. Aw, I love Remus too, and I'm looking forward to writing him.  

    I know...those Dementors are horrible, horrible creatures.  I always got the chills when I saw them in the movies, and read about them in JK's books too.

     

    Severus is starting to feel differently about Harry, but he won't come right out and say it, and Draco was a little shocked when Severus, although not coming right out and reprimanding Draco, or God forbid take points from Slytherin, did stop Draco from continuing to taunt Harry openly.  Yeah, it should be interesting when we come to that scene.  It would be fun to write too!

     I'm not sure though that Dumbledore can really do much, but yeah, if anyone can...he's the one, for sure.

     

    Thanks Kirsteh, and please write as soon as you can. I know that you are having computer problems so I understand if it is difficult for you to write, but I'm having withdrawls!

Title: Bells and Whistles 24 Oct 2009 8:36 pm
Reviewer: justjoanjm (Signed) [Report This]
    I enjoyed this. Somehow I didn't expect Snape to come out as Harry's father, but I think it's well written and quite compelling. I look forward to the next chapter

    Author's Response: Oh thank you. There were some very subtle clues at the beginning of the story, but you'd have to have really looked for them. Thank you so much, I appreciate your kind words.

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