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Reviews For Where Once Was Light
Author's Response: With as many pinecones as we had, I think I could give out as many as I wanted and still have enough left over! But you'll have to see about the rat. Thanks for another review...I give you a pinecone. XD
Author's Response: Thanks tabbycat! So glad you're enjoying the drama! XD
Author's Response: Of course. It wouldn't be much fun else, now would it? Thanks for the review!!
Author's Response: Opps! Sorry. Thanks for telling me! I'm glad you like the story though! Sorry about the cliffee though. But don't worry, it won't be a cliffee for long! ^^ Thanks again!!
This is another really great fic, the second from last line was just so cute! The last line...uh oh, I detech a rat!!! LOL! What an awful joke! *coughs embarrassedly* moving on from that... I still love your writing style. It's just the way you insert small things which just really make the story special. It's brilliant to read! Author's Response: YAY! Someone wants a pinecone!!! You can have as many as your little heart desires!! And thanks for another complement! That really made my day! And I'm glad that everyone seems to be picking up my "little things". YAY! Twenty points to you! Thanks again!
Hilarious that he can't think of anything for Dudley to do but stand in the corner. Aww, Severus's happiness at learning his son should not look like James, shattered the next second. Merlin! Mine was too! Oh, okay. Phew! *smirk* Noticing Severus seemed too excited about all of this. Of course he would be. The practicing thing is pretty interesting. Leave it to Snape to practice, and I loved Harry's thoughts on the practicing. Hmm, staying with the Weasleys. (Won't even lie, I am not a huge fan of pretty much that whole family with the exceptions of Fred, George, Bill, and Arthur, but that's just me...) Poor Severus, now a fugitive. Only two days have passed? Severus made one heck of a recovery in two days for being so injured... I KNEW IT! I KNEW THAT BOTTLE CAP IN THE YARD WAS GOING TO COME BACK! AND WORMTAIL STOLE IT! I KNEW IT WAS COMING BACK!!!! Typo Alerts: "Noticing Vernon and… the other boy- he would really have to learn that whales name- were in the room,..." Whales needs to be possessive to form whale's. "“You are distress,” the professor stated bluntly." Change "distress" to "distressed." This applies to both cases (the sentence after that: "“I assume that you’re distress is rooted in that letter.") "His mother had fallen in love with a man, so..." Change "a" to "the." First thing that popped into my brain when I read that was, "Well, I hope she fell in love with a man!" *giggle* "Heck, even all the Slytherin’s liked the man. Even the Slytherin that were in trouble with the man still seemed to admire Snape." In both case of the House name, use "Slytherins." "But that fact had not yet bloosumed in the Potions Master’s..." "bloosumed" should be spelled, "blossomed." "...Harry realized that the man was in his elements when angry or intimidating." Keep "elements" singular there for "element." Author's Response: The wonderful things about Severus's, are Severus's are wonderful thing! They can heal quickly because they're wizards, and they won't admit that they're tired or hurting when they really are! ^^ And hurrah for you! You guessed it!! Twenty points to you!! And because of your wonderful review, I say, don't worry about the Weasley. I have a plan! *shouts dramatically* ... sorry about that. Thanks again for the review!!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
50 points to Slytherin for the awesome chapters. i swear your a great author Author's Response: YAYS!! I've never gotten ponts before, that's fun!! ^^ Thank you very much! Your review made me UBER happy! *claps hands excitedly like a mental two year old* Ah, heck, another FIFTY points to Slytherin just cuz! Thanks again!!
I thought Harry had picked up the bottle cap... I guess I missed something. Anyways, it is hopefully just charmed to work for Severus and no one else. However, I don't think any Death Eaters should be able to portkey in anyhow because of the wards. It would be pretty funny if it splinched them when they tried. Anyways, I greatly enjoyed this chapter and look forward to reading more soon. -P.G. Author's Response: Why thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter too! And yes, Harry did pick up the bottle cap, but he threw it away, remember? But yeah, a good splinching sounds kinda fun. (Lucius Malfoy anyone?) Thanks again!! |
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