Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 25: Fall Out 14 Oct 2009 3:17 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome story so far. Ooh I love Smilies, they're one of my favorite fruitsnacks

    Author's Response: HA! Yay for Smilies! Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 25: Fall Out 12 Sep 2009 10:12 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I guess it was H's letter that was undelivered? Or has Hermi gone missing as well? Heh, it would be a twist! Mila

    Author's Response: LOL No, it's Harry's... but boy would it have been funny if it had been Hermione's!! lol Thanks for a nice review!!
Title: Chapter 25: Fall Out 11 Sep 2009 12:05 am
Reviewer: Pati (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ten days and still nothing? How could you?

    Author's Response: Sorry!!!!!!!!!!!! Look, I'm posting right now!!!!
Title: Chapter 25: Fall Out 02 Sep 2009 7:33 pm
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed) [Report This]
    What's funny is that Colonel Brandon had no first name in the Austen book. It was only when the movie came out (with Alan Rickman as that character) that he was given a first name. I find that kind of funny.

    Severus's rationalizing of how he felt about Lily and Harry/Severin was an interesting introspective thing there. Wish Harry would have told him why he objected to Peter so much. Maybe then they wouldn't have totally had a stand-off. The Weasley scene was interesting. Ron will have a fit when the owl comes back with Harry's letter. Oh dear. And are you going to continue this all through the fourth book timeline? The Quidditch World Cup and all that? That would be interesting to see your skewed timeline into that...

    Typo Alerts: "fourteen year old feel at a distinct disadvantage form the adult wizard." "form" should be "from." "It was lucky for him that he had remember this place,..." Should be "remembered." "...Mrs. Cadogan, I shall conceder your advice,...”" It should be spelled "consider." "How dare that child be so ungratefully, turning his back..." Change "ingratefully" to "ungrateful." [same paragraph] "...to keep him away from abusive relative?" "relative" to "relatives." "...trickle through him, slowly at first, something icy, something fridge, before it..." Do you mean "frigid?" "Merlin, his own childhood could not be counted on to drawl out any useful information..." I believe the phrase is "draw out" not "drawl out." "All he had showed was anger, bitterness..." Change "showed" to "shown." "...the situation became clear, all the vales had been torn away." Should be "veils."

    And don't fear the professors. I myself have some...how shall I say?...unique...professors as well this term.

    Author's Response: Yeah, the Colonel never really did have a first name, but I like Christopher a lot better than some of the other names people have given him, such as *grimaces* James *shutters* And poor Sev and Harry see that they're not getting on too well now that they're by themselves. How sad. And YES! This is going to carry out through the school year, because that's the part I've had planned for EVER!! That's that part that I REALLY want to see people's thoughts on *grin* But thanks for the review, it helps make things go better. I'll really try to catch up on your story. I've just had SO much worthless reading to do in some of my classes *groan* It's common sense that you have to read or else you forget about it because it's common sense. Does that make sense? Oh well. THANKS for the review!! :)
Title: Chapter 25: Fall Out 02 Sep 2009 6:01 pm
Reviewer: salazarschild (Signed) [Report This]
    awww poor ron
    I cant wait for the next one thanks for updating:)

    Author's Response: Thanks! Sorry again about not updating sooner, but with school and stupid computer issues *mutters* it's been crazy. Thanks again for a nice review!!
Title: Chapter 25: Fall Out 01 Sep 2009 8:04 pm
Reviewer: Starbuck1332 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Just read this for the first time. I love it!! You portray Snape and Harry beautifully. I have always hated Dumbledore - I HATE manipulative people. (Sure I admire his magical power - but hate his use of people for the "greater good".) Your story gives the me perfect outlet to enjoy that dislike of that particular character.

    Author's Response: YAY!! I'm glad you like it so much! I never realy like Dubly unless someone makes him a complete idiot. XD So I'm really glad that there are other people out there that feel the same as me. Thanks for the awesome reveiw!! I hope you keep reading!
Title: Chapter 25: Fall Out 01 Sep 2009 7:51 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, that was graet!

    Oh yes! Gummy smiles. Sweet and yummy.

    Sorry about your computer Ivy. If it's any consolation, that was a wonderful chapter, so full of emotion. We really got to see how Severus is at a loss on how to behave as a father, and his insecurities.

    Well done, and I can't wait for the next chappie.

    Author's Response: Yay! Thank you. I'm gladyou like to see how the potions master ticks. XD And yes, my computer's beig evil, but I think I'm going to get it all taken care of soon. Thanks for the review, I always love hearing from you! (hey, that rhymed!) :D
Title: Chapter 25: Fall Out 01 Sep 2009 5:02 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    brilliant chapter
    update soon

    Author's Response: Thanks, I'll try!! :)
Title: Chapter 25: Fall Out 01 Sep 2009 4:15 pm
Reviewer: Doewke (Signed) [Report This]
    ABFAB!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it! Every moment of it. you've nicely explained the process of Severus' feelings. And then at the end where Ron sets out to write a letter to Harry....Wow what a cliffhanger btw!! Congrats!!

    Author's Response: Wow 0.o Thanks very much!! That just made my mornng! I'm going to give you ffty points for being far too generous  I'm sure. :) I'm really glad you liked the way I explaned Sev's thought process. That makes me happy and thanks for liking the cliffie. :D Have some smilies! XD
Title: Chapter 25: Fall Out 01 Sep 2009 12:55 pm
Reviewer: Lionessmon (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter, the slow build of Harry and Severus's relationship is really enjoyable, the tears the regret etc. Keep up the great work and don't mind the grouchy profs they spend too long with there head in a book. Post soon

    Author's Response: :D Thanks for the lovely review!! It means a lot! Have some smilies!! XD

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