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Title: Chapter 26: Beginnings of Trust 22 Sep 2009 3:50 pm
Reviewer: Starbuck1332 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter - loved the scuffle between Sirus and Snape. It has always been my belief that Snape would know more about how to physically defend himself (not just magically) than the average person just from the obvious danger that he placed himself in for so many years (you would definetely want to work out and know some moves so to speak) and I thought you brought that out in this chapter in a subtle but awesome way. Thanks for continuing with this story - it is truly amazing.

    P.S. - what is "prompt" fest??

    Author's Response:

    Awww!! Thanks!...but, uh, I think that you reviewed on the wrong chapter. lol That's okay! I still like you for it! ^-^ And thanks so much! This review really made me smile! And I know, I always thought Sev would have a bit more know how that the average wizard too. That's kinda why I did this. lol Thanks for noticing!

    And a prompt fest is where the authors on this site can place random ideas out during a set time and then other authors can pick and choose ideas and try to make a story out of them! It's really kinda fun! I've already got three chaps. of mine done. You can read about it on the homepage if you want. Thanks again!!

Title: Chapter 26: Beginnings of Trust 12 Sep 2009 8:12 pm
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed) [Report This]
    I understand about the pointless reading. I have two writing courses right now, so my recreational writing pace is getting Avada Kedavra'd pretty much...*sniff* And I feel your pain with the evil professors. I have a pair of them this term that I just dread their classes. I shall await your updates patiently, since I know how it feels to have your writing speed decline due to coursework. Rest easy, all will be well.

    Explaining Snape's difficulty with apologizing was interesting, considering "unapologetic" is after all a Slytherin trait...*grins* "James won't teach him anything too useful!" *snort* Hilarious. Aww, if only Lily had woken up a few seconds earlier. I don't know why, but the image of Snape and Harry having ice cream is hysterical. I just can't picture it...well, I can but it's really, really funny! Isn't the demolition of the Dursley home out in the papers? Even the Muggle news...that would be alarming, if someone's house was just torched one night. Weird that Hermione (with Muggle parents) would not have heard of that...

    (I could be wrong here, because it's been a while since I read the books...Didn't Ron get Pigwidgeon during Goblet of Fire? And since your story takes place before 4th Year, he should still be using Errol. I could be wrong though, but I swore Sirius gave him Pigwidgeon during the trio's 4th year. But, hey! Your story, your artistic license! But now I need to look it up...for my own curiosity...)

    You don't have to sing me a song, unless it makes you happy...Then, by all means, sing away! Hope the time until your next update goes a little better.

    Typo Alerts: "It was only when he was too the breaking point with guilt..." "too" should be "to." "...until the hour was decent and Harry would walk." Did you mean "wake" instead of "walk?" "You may shutter at the name, but I think you..." Should be "shudder." "I know he’s love you." SHould be "he'd." "In that face there was Severus Snape, just as there was Lily Evans Snape." Lily's maiden name and her husband's name should be hyphenated to read "Evans-Snape" otherwise it would read that her middle name is Evans, not her maiden name. "...while and cups being picked up and sat down." Should be "set" not "sat," since inanimate objects cannot sit down. *giggles* Though the image is funny. "...wizard walking down the isles of a Muggle supermarket." Should be "aisles." "...elder wizard tucked away both before nodded towards the door." Either add "he" to make the phrase "before he nodded to the door," or change the ending on "nod" to be "nodding." "...looking at him a little bit on the worried." Either add the word "side," after "worried," or change the end of the sentence to read, "...the boy was also looking at him worriedly." "For his part, Severus thought he might go made with waiting." Change "made" to "mad." "Both went to be distinctly happier than the night before." Change "be" to "bed." "...not meeting the full approval of the cleaver little witch, but..." Change "cleaver" to "clever." "...only been parted for about a months time." Should be "month's." "...she hoped that nothing terrible wrong had happened." Should be "terribly." "Hermione thought through just about ever possibility that she could..." Should be "every."

    Author's Response: Thanks Raven. Yeah, although there's more reading in college, I really don't think it's too bad. I just get annoyed with people. *rolls eyes* Some times they're really dumb. And I'm glad you liked this too. I didn't think it turned out quite how I wanted it, but I couldn't think how to change it, so I'm glad you liked it. YAY! And I'm *winces* ashamed *hangs head* to have fallen behind in your brilliant story. BUT I'm going to try and catch up tonight. I don't have anything, so I'm going to play catch up! YAY!!! And for you, my dear, I shall sing, "Lift Thine Eyes." I think that is a very pretty song, and it's usually sung by three women, so let's pretend it can either be sung as a solo or I have two of my other friends here with me. ^-^ Thanks again!!
Title: Chapter 26: Beginnings of Trust 12 Sep 2009 10:48 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, shopping from morning to evening. What a fun! Update soon, please. Mila PS What song?

    Author's Response: Shopping when you both want stuff and need stuff is the best I think. ^-^ And I will try to update as soon as I can. For you I will sing "Et Tra La La Y El Punteado." ( Yay more Italian!!)
Title: Chapter 26: Beginnings of Trust 11 Sep 2009 4:28 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter wonder what ron and hermione's reaction to harry being "killed".
    Update soon

    Author's Response: Thanks! Ron and Hermione will start to learn things soon. Thanks for another nice review!! For you I will sing "'Tis The Last Rose Of Summer." I think that one is really pretty. :)
Title: Chapter 26: Beginnings of Trust 11 Sep 2009 1:16 pm
Reviewer: Monica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wonderful chapter

    Author's Response: Thanks!! For you I'll sing "Et tra la la y el punteado," another little Italian song. :)
Title: Chapter 26: Beginnings of Trust 11 Sep 2009 12:16 pm
Reviewer: DoC Brown (Signed) [Report This]
    I cannot even begin to imagine how everyone will kick Snape when it all comes to light... not that he cares, but Harry might.

    Author's Response: LOL! Oh, Snapers has plans enough for everyone. But yeah, Harry will be a little upset about things. Thanks for another nice review. I will sing for you "Lachen und Weinen," a cute little German song I know. :)
Title: Chapter 26: Beginnings of Trust 11 Sep 2009 12:13 pm
Reviewer: Lionessmon (Signed) [Report This]
    Hello!! Evil Geography teacher I remember them but I have never heard of voice lessons. Brilliant chapter you still write well despite the return to study. Keep up the great work and post soon. Also kudos for being the author of the only fic I have read where Snape has said the word sorry. Post soon.

    Author's Response:

    lol Thanks!! And the voice lessons teacher is basically my singing teacher. She's a really good sing, and I've never had formal training, and so she thinks I'm a hick and can't sing well. "But I have potentenical" *rolls eyes* "Thanks for that!" lol

    But thanks again, I'm glad you liked the chapter!! That makes me really happy. And yes, Snape siad that little word *gasp* But some how I don't think he would have trouble with it if he really was sorry. I mean he begged with Lily, so why wouldn't he just say the word for Harry? Again, thanks, and for you I will sing "Se tu m'ami," a fiery little Italian song. :)

Title: Chapter 26: Beginnings of Trust 11 Sep 2009 5:29 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, it's fine! This was a wonderful chapter!!!! I'm glad they made up, and I really do hope people find out Harry isn't dead pretty soon. Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Aww, thanks B00kw0rm! You're sweet! That makes me feel better, and I'm glad you liked the chapter. Yeah, things are going to get interesting soon. So thanks a lot!! I shall sing for you "Danny Boy". Enjoy! :)
Title: Chapter 26: Beginnings of Trust 11 Sep 2009 5:00 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Hang in there, Ivy. Real Life tends to interfere at times. No worries.

    Author's Response: Thanks cckeimig! Yeah, real life sucks some times. Boo!! Writings a lot more fun. So thanks for another review! I shall sing for you, "Here's a Health to the Company" a very nice Irish folk songs.
Title: Chapter 26: Beginnings of Trust 11 Sep 2009 3:57 am
Reviewer: astutia (Signed) [Report This]
    Review!

    Look, I reviewed!

    I love this fic! Though, I do think I should re-read it from the beginning, because I can't remember lot of the plot. oops.

    Author's Response:

    You are just a little ray of sunshine, aren't you? lol Yay review!! Thanks for that... you little snark you ;)

    And I'm glad you like my story! ^-^ Now I've got warm fuzzies in side! Yays! And I know, sometimes I have to go and re-read some fics too. But glad you like it! I shall sing for you "Shall We Gather By the River." Enjoy!!


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