Title: Chapter 15 – The End (28)
| 23 Sep 2015 12:27 am
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Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed)
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I thoroughly enjoyed this.
--his
Author's Response: I'm glad you did. :)
Title: Chapter 11 - The Photosession (24)
| 22 Sep 2015 11:58 pm
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Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed)
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Pookah inspected the camera at the best possible moment. lol!
--his
Author's Response: I really loved writing this little scene. :)
Title: Chapter 9- Hagrid’s Hut (22)
| 22 Sep 2015 11:37 pm
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Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed)
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Taking care of a little sick one on a schedule may help Severus stick to his eating and napping schedule.
I can just picture Pookah under a 4yr old Severus' shirt! lol. That pic is 'awwwwww' worthy.
--his
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 7 - Diagon Alley (20)
| 22 Sep 2015 11:05 pm
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Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed)
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Kids make us feel we have aced our exam and then failed then aced then ... well you get the picture ... gotta love them. One minute they are laughing so hard then the next tears the size golfballs are pouring down their faces then they are happy all over again. Whew! I'm exhausted just remembering raising my two. lol.
A pet weasel. Adult Severus would find the humor in that somewhere-once he was alone and no one could hear him laugh about it.
--his
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Author's Response: Thanks for your wonderful words.
Title: Chapter 6 - Dinner Time (19)
| 22 Sep 2015 10:52 pm
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Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed)
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'Puppy-dog eyes will get you nowhere young man.' lol.
--his
Title: Chapter 5 – After dinner (18)
| 22 Sep 2015 10:42 pm
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Calling Minerva 'mummy' was perfect.
--his
Title: Chapter 4 - The Burrow (17)
| 22 Sep 2015 10:30 pm
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Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed)
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Children can be quite adept at noticing when others are sad or in pain. My daughter is one. She wants everyone to be happy and ok. It makes her sad when others aren't. Even now in her 20s.
--his
Title: Chapter 3 - New friends (13-16)
| 22 Sep 2015 10:18 pm
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Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed)
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I am loving this fic. Naptime with Alaster was great.
Hermione to the rescue! That was really good.
--his
Title: Chapter 2 - Adjusting (7-12)
| 22 Sep 2015 9:38 pm
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Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed)
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This made me smile, after it brought tears to my eyes. Enjoyed the part where Severus was flying. Well done.
--his
Title: Chapter 1 – The Beginning (1-6)
| 22 Sep 2015 8:52 pm
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Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed)
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Sweet, adorable, yet heartbreaking... my chest is literally aching. That poor child. Can we dig up Tobias so I can strangle him?
I got the impression you took this over from another author...? Obsidian Embrace? Well written, whichever one of you wrote this... lol.
Looking forward to the next chapter. Here I go!
--his
Author's Response: No I didn't take this over. It's my story. But maybe there is a similar story. It's such a long time since I wrote or read fanfiction.
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