| Title: Inseparable Pair
| 21 Oct 2017 4:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Kjoyp (Signed)
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So far I love it. I'd be happy to beta for you if you still need one.
At some point it would be lovely if you wrote a prologue, with James, Lily, Narcissa & Lucius. I know it would be a huge stretch, but it could be Narcissa (re)connecting with Sirius, perhaps over fear for both their babies. Maybe Sirius was watching Harry that day and he and Draco hit it off. Maybe some accidental magic to gift the other with a favorite toy, or levitating into the same playpen. Maybe Lucius knows Voldemort favors rituals with magical children and he fears for Draco.
Just anything to tie them together at the beginning.
A very wonderful story, I like the bond between Harry and Draco.
Pity that it was not up to date, I hope you resume writing it again.
(I'm italian, so sorry for may English!)
Darn I was hoping That Harry's real reaction to hearring that Sev was Draco godfather would be revealed. I know he would be hurt. I hope this will be co continued, I found this story by mistake, but I'm glad I did.
| Title: Nearing the End
| 18 Nov 2015 7:57 am
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| Reviewer: evan (Anonymous)
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The kids barely interact with snape the summary is misleadin
| Title: Recollections
| 24 Apr 2014 2:21 am
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| Reviewer: Brooke (Anonymous)
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Wow, Your story was awesome!!! I'll love to see on their 2rd year at Hogwarts as brothers!!!!!!!
you aren't their father by blood Severus,
but that isn't a barrier to you loving them and being loved by them
Beautifully written.
Keep up the great work.
Please update soon.
SM
| Title: Orphans
| 27 Mar 2011 10:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Was (Anonymous)
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The banner is really nice, and the story is well written. Good job.
This is a cute fic :)
It was full of fluff but was also more dramatic what with Draco running away.
I love the cute things like Draco and harry sleeping together and stuff.
I'd like to see more!
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