I really hope that Snape will splat that odious toad. Harry’s forbearance knows no bounds..
Oh dear. Great chapter, but what a chapter end. I must read on.
Life can (hopefully) only go up from here for Harry. Thanks for the very well-written scenes in this chapter.
Wonderful chapter. I love how you showed us Harry’s perspective from the firecall with Sirius. It was skillfully done.
I really hope Snape sees what’s going on with Harry soon! Thanks for another great chapter.
This is a terrific start to your story, though poor Harry. It’s so good, I can’t believe it’s your first fic. Looking forward to reading on.
ooo you should update, i love this story, is very interesting ^^
Ohh, the tension! The drama! It's all climaxing, this is so exciting. You have a lovely story here, please update soon!
I really love this story. It's unique and takes advantage of expanding the rules and events of the canon universe. That's what I like to see in fan fiction. You've taken an interesting turn with Harry's fifth year. I can't wait to read more. I really want some more Harry and Snape scenes with Harry's recovery. I hope you come back to this work. (~.^)
| Title: Chapter 16
| 12 Nov 2015 2:30 pm
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| Reviewer: bae (Anonymous)
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Hi ik its been like 5yrs but pls update anyway lol
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