Wow! I must say. Thanks for the review! I don't normally ask for reviews in my stories because I think that detracts from the story itself. But that's not to say I don't obsess over them every time I post a new chapter. To say that would be lying because I do! Lol! :) I appreciate them greatly, so thank you.

I just wanted to reply to a few things. Firstly, I think those missing sentences are either a site error or a browser error on either the site's end or your browser's end. When I checked a while ago, all my sentences appeared complete. Specifically, the part you were referring to looked complete to me. McGonagall tells Harry to call her Minerva and Harry blushes and says to call her by her first name seems disrespectful to him. Thus, he opted to go with an idea of his to call her Nana. McGonagall, of course, accepts, saying she'd be honored, and it carries on from there. I'm sorry if you weren't able to read the full extent of that scene. Perhaps if you try switching browsers? That may be it. Perhaps its a formatting error. (I'm sorry...I'm a tech junkie. :P Comes with being a science major) Lol! 

To answer your question, yes, Sev will indeed keep his memories. However, if you step back and look at the science behind the story, it might give you a hint as to how little Sev's character will develop. Actually, I may have already inserted a hint in this chapter. If you look closely enough, you'll be able to find it. The hint will be explained in detail, of course, in a later chapter, but it's there. Sev's mind is a mighty mysterious thing, and Harry's just beginning to figure it out. ;) There's a particular phrase in one sentence that, if googled, will offer some insight into the development of our little potions master. :D

And thank you for your compliments about the walking/crawling scene. A bit of a confession--when I started writing this piece a few months ago, I performed a bit of a counting error. It was only...two days ago, when I was outlining the rest of the story, that I realized my mistake. When I originally wrote this, I had Sev at six months old instead of five, which makes a world of difference (sort of) when you're an infant. But I opted to go with the excuse that "babies develop at different rates" to make it seem a bit more logical. Although that is pretty much correct-- babies do develop at different rates. I can't tell you how many youtube videos I watched on baby development (in my research for this story) that said that exact sentence over and over again. :P The babble may seem a bit advance, also, but picture yourself in the scene, listening to a five-month-old utter those strings of consonants and syllables. It's not going to seem very advance to you then, I guarantee you. :P Lol! 

And thanks for the thing about Ginny. I'm already about halfway done with the story, so there's not much I can change about that now, but I'll keep that in the back of my mind. Actually, looking back at it, I don't think I made her too demanding. She's a right firecracker, that's for sure, and she makes her opinion known, but Harry's still up in there, arguing right on back. No...I don't think she's that demanding. She and Harry have an equal share in running the household, I reckon, looking back at all these chapters. 

Anyway, thanks a lot for the review! I appreciate it greatly! And please, do keep them coming. :)

Goodnight!