This chapter was absolutely astounding! I admit that I wanted to cry when Harry said that the World Trade Center wasn't going anywhere.... and it made me wonder how the Wizarding World reacted to the events of 9/11/2001.
Back to the climax of New Year's Eve, the only proposal I could think of as more romantic was the one my husband made to me many, many years ago. :)
The last scene broke my heart. After the joy of the proposal and the way that Severus finally felt as if he were part of everyone celebrating a new year, new start and new life, being ripped away from his mummy and daddy (and he FINALLY called them that!) was just horrible. Thank Merlin that Harry and Ginny have those mental bonds with him... I just hope that the Malfoys don't have some kind of nasty magic that would block it!
Heh, the Slytherin in me is coming out. If the Malfoys are under constant supervision, which might just moderate their reaction to Severus' behavior, Severus can start throwing the mother of all temper tantrums, bring out all the behaviors that he knows isn't tolerated at home with Harry and Ginny, and so forth, and drive the Malfoy's crazy! *grin* Hey, he might even drive Draco to drink publicly!
In any case, I know that baby Severus is in good authorial hands and I'm looking forward to seeing the next chapter when you get it done. I've really enjoyed this story very much and I'm putting it on my favorites!
Wonderfully, well done!
This was an absolutely wonderfully done chapter. I wantto rip Malfoy's head off, of course. I just know that the wretch will get his in the end. Karma won't leave things that unbalanced for very long. Congrats on finishing up your classes and on graduating!
very moving.....our por Sev
OH MY GOD!! What an amazing chapter! Tears here also. Could someone pass me the bat please? Poor Sev, to be taken away like that! I'm anxious to see what Malfoy wants with him.
This was worth waiting for. Great job!! Congratulations on finals and graduation !!
this chapter made me cry. :( Poor little Sevvie being taking from his mommy and daddy like that! Anyways, the chapter was amazing as always (besides Malfoy being a jerk).
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| 09 May 2010 9:21 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Congratulations on finals being done and graduation. This chapter was worth waiting for, I can't believe that Sev was taken away. Im glad he is protected. Can't wait to read more.
OMG, tears here as well. *takes a bat from Leilia and gives it a test swing* I loved the chapter though. Thanks for updating.
Your descriptions of New York were wonderful, I felt like I was really there with our favorite family. ;-}
Oh my word though, you actually made me cry there in the last part of the chapter. Can we all go and hurt Draco and his father? *starts handing baseball bats out to other readers and looks hopeful*
I thought that my heart was going to break with Harry and Ginny's when Sev finally called them Mummy and Daddy, what should have been one of their happiest memories is turning into one of their worst.
I can't wait to read the next chapter. And congratulations on graduating!!
Leilia
ACK!!!!!!!! They HAVE to get him back ASAP!!! Please, please, please update soon!
P.S: LOVED the chapter, the stuff with the World Trade Center was sad.
Oh....this is a terrible thing for poor Severus. The description of the room where Severus was placed was ominous and sounded rather inappropriate for a child his age. No windows? I know that Harry will do whatever it takes to win custody back of his child...no matter what it might be. What is it that Draco has against Harry that's so damaging? I have to wonder one thing....with how closely related many of the Wizarding families are..isn't there a good chance that the Potters and Princes are as well?
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