Excellent chapter. I really enjoyed how you brought the Weasley's back in and what you've got going on with the 'princess'.
| Title: The Princess
| 21 Aug 2010 4:18 am
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| Reviewer: DazzlingD (Anonymous)
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| Title: The Princess
| 20 Aug 2010 11:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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It's great that you updated this story! It has a great potential.
I wouldn't wont the Ron for house mate... He can be sometimes great mate, but also he can be self-centered, uncomprehending, jealous, lazy and spiteful... As you can see, I don't like him very much... I can see him as a man who can hold a party, make a lot of noise and mayhem and don't take into consideration that maybe Harry want a quiet home - and because Harry is Harry, he will stand aside and let him, because the most important is that others have a good time, of course, it doesn't matter what he want... Maybe Snape will teach him a self-confidence...
And I hope that Harry and Jennifer will be together =o) It would be interesting watching Ginny when she realized that she doesn't have a chance with Harry. Yay!
So I'm looking forward the next chapter! =o)
P.S: Sorry for my mistakes, English is not my native language.
| Title: The Princess
| 20 Aug 2010 11:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Ichigo Mirai (Anonymous)
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this is really good!! wonder what'll happen next...
THIS IS A PRETTY AWESOME STORY.
Although it looks like you've abandoned it? Alas.
My only criticism is that eight-year-old Harry wasn't nearly as adorable as he could've been. Oh well.
Also, how much does Older Harry remember? Hmm. Perhaps we'll find out...In The Next Chapter.
Hey, I really like this story, are you ever going to finish it?
| Title: Shopkeeper
| 28 Apr 2010 3:29 am
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| Reviewer: Princess613 (Anonymous)
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I really like this story. I personally don't think the Drusleys abused Harry, but you did the scene well.
Author's Response: In the real books I don't think they did either, but in fan-fiction the story becomes whatever you write it to be, so in this one Harry did get abused unfortunately. That is also the case in most of the stories on P & S... it makes for a more angsty story.
I enjoyed this story and can't wait to find out if Snape will continue to treat Potter nicely or what will transpire. Kind of wish that the deaging potion hadn't worn off so quickly. Anywho can't wait for more wonderful job.
this is really good!! please update whenever you can... can't wait to read what happens next in this!
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