| Title: Shopkeeper
| 11 Dec 2009 2:15 am
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| Reviewer: helga1967 (Anonymous)
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Please, Please, please ... continue. The tale is very good and I love to see more of this original fic.
| Title: Shopkeeper
| 21 Nov 2009 3:12 am
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| Reviewer: helga1967 (Anonymous)
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Excellent! I loved so far. Please, continue.
| Title: Shopkeeper
| 03 Nov 2009 8:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Angela (Anonymous)
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A very nice start. I would very much like to see Harry and Snape truely begin to trust each other.
I really adored this story. I wouldn't mind reading it over and over again. I'm looking forward for the next update. Thank you for the story. ;)
Cool! I'm enjoying this so far. Hope you continue! :)
-K
I like the turn this took. Since Snape doesn't even know where Harry lives, will he have to take him in?
I liked the way you wrote from childish Harry's perspective. It was child-like but not *too* young.
-K
I really like it so far! But... Diagon Alley is two words. Say it like "diagonelly" and you'll end up at Knockturn...
“Now before you take this parchment, you understand that once you are apprenticed you are under the full authority of your Master?” Harry nodded, realizing that she had said ‘he’ meaning he had definitely not been placed with Tonks.
The receptionist never referred to 'he' or 'him'....
The premise is certainly a rich one. Looking forward to reading more! :)
-K
| Title: Shopkeeper
| 14 Oct 2009 4:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Pati (Anonymous)
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It was so wonderful story a month ago... Now it is unfinished
Author's Response: It's not unfinished. I just haven't had time to write on it. I work, go to school, do externship, and take care of a one year old baby and my husband. I don't mind gentle prodding every now and again to get me to write more, but I don't appreciate the implication that the story has been abondoned.
| Title: Shopkeeper
| 03 Oct 2009 7:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Monica (Anonymous)
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Did you forget about us?
Author's Response: Nope didn't forget, just been working on other things along with taking care of my family and going to school.
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