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Reviews For Apprenticed
Author's Response: This is the first challenge that I've ever responded to. I saw it and thought about it for a couple of days and then just knew that I had to write something for it. It's such a great prompt! I just couldn't pass it up. I'm glad you're liking it so far. I have some good ideas comming up in future chapters and plan the story to be about 10 chapters long. There will be a little less focus on Harry vs. Snape as the story progresses and more focus on Harry's new life, but Snape will be a constant presence and influence.
To all my other reviewers: I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! I would respond to you all but there's a baby in my lap and I can only type so much one-handed :)
-JW.
You are such a gifted writer, and I loved that Snape saw the real Harry. I would have loved for Harry to stay younger a little while longer, and have him have some of the childhood that he was denied. Can't wait for the next update.
You are such a gifted writer, and I loved that Snape saw the real Harry. I would have loved for Harry to stay younger a little while longer, and have him have some of the childhood that he was denied. Can't wait for the next update.
You are such a gifted writer, and I loved that Snape saw the real Harry. I would have loved for Harry to stay younger a little while longer, and have him have some of the childhood that he was denied. Can't wait for the next update.
That's so sad that Snape slapped him when Harry tried to hold his hand because he was scared. Great chappie, on to the next.
I hope tht soon Snape actually teaches him something. Great story, off to read more!
I'm so glad that you've decided to post your stories here. I loved both of their reactions when they found out that Harry was apprenticed to Snape! |
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