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Reviews For Apprenticed
Title: Shopkeeper 30 Sep 2009 10:11 pm
Reviewer: Jen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love it!
Title: Shopkeeper 22 Sep 2009 1:39 pm
Reviewer: Pati (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like it very much
Title: Shopkeeper 19 Sep 2009 7:11 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Really excellent story. Your writing is very good and your story is even better. I'm very glad they do weekend updates and I found this.
Title: Shopkeeper 17 Sep 2009 5:29 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Cool! I'm rather stoked that you're answering my challenge. LOL It's really great so far and I can't wait to read more. Harry's abuse is really sad but I am glad that Snape knows about about it now and hopefully it will go a bit easier between them from now on.

    Author's Response:

    This is the first challenge that I've ever responded to.  I saw it and thought about it for a couple of days and then just knew that I had to write something for it.  It's such a great prompt!   I just couldn't pass it up.  I'm glad you're liking it so far.  I have some good ideas comming up in future chapters and plan the story to be about 10 chapters long.  There will be a little less focus on Harry vs. Snape as the story progresses and more focus on Harry's new life, but Snape will be a constant presence and influence.

     

    To all my other reviewers: I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!  I would respond to you all but there's a baby in my lap and I can only type so much one-handed :)

     

    -JW.

     

Title: Shopkeeper 16 Sep 2009 11:24 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg, that was sad but sweet too.

    You are such a gifted writer, and I loved that Snape saw the real Harry. I would have loved for Harry to stay younger a little while longer, and have him have some of the childhood that he was denied.

    Can't wait for the next update.
Title: Shopkeeper 16 Sep 2009 11:24 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg, that was sad but sweet too.

    You are such a gifted writer, and I loved that Snape saw the real Harry. I would have loved for Harry to stay younger a little while longer, and have him have some of the childhood that he was denied.

    Can't wait for the next update.
Title: Shopkeeper 16 Sep 2009 11:24 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg, that was sad but sweet too.

    You are such a gifted writer, and I loved that Snape saw the real Harry. I would have loved for Harry to stay younger a little while longer, and have him have some of the childhood that he was denied.

    Can't wait for the next update.
Title: The Unseen 16 Sep 2009 10:31 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor Harry!! How scarey for him to be with Snape of all peop, and so confused thinking that Snape is better than the Dursleys.

    That's so sad that Snape slapped him when Harry tried to hold his hand because he was scared.

    Great chappie, on to the next.
Title: Dirty Work 16 Sep 2009 7:45 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor Harry. He's not an apprentice, he's a blood maid!!

    I hope tht soon Snape actually teaches him something.

    Great story, off to read more!
Title: A Mistake 16 Sep 2009 1:26 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, this promises to be very good! I can' t wait to read more.

    I'm so glad that you've decided to post your stories here.

    I loved both of their reactions when they found out that Harry was apprenticed to Snape!

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