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Title: A Knife to the Heart 18 Mar 2011 1:35 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Snape called himself "A skilled occlumens" but I think you meant to write a skilled "legilimens" instead??

    Author's Response: Legilimens is the spell used to enter into someone's mind, but Occlumens is what one is called who has the skills to do so.  Thanks for the review.
Title: The Forest 18 Mar 2011 1:29 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    awwwwhhh - I hope Harry gets more new clothes soon - it's so sad that his good ones got messed up!
Title: A Castle Christmas 25 Feb 2011 5:06 am
Reviewer: Shhh (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You are one of my very favorite authors!!Thanks for all the great stories!
Title: A Castle Christmas 10 Feb 2011 2:31 am
Reviewer: Shhhh (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great!!! More, please!
Title: A Plan 02 Jan 2011 6:11 pm
Reviewer: POTTERPHILE (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi, I am enjoy ing the story so far. One thing though. This is a mistake I see amazingly often. The correct phrase is, '' intent and purpose'', not intensive purposes.

    Author's Response: Yeah, thanks.  I went back and fixed it.  I don't know what I was thinking when I wrote that down.  This may have been one of those chapters I was writing in the middle of the night with a sleep deprived spelling error prone mind.  Thanks again.
Title: Snow Drift 15 Dec 2010 7:50 pm
Reviewer: Evanlyn (Signed) [Report This]
    Great!
Title: A Knife to the Heart 14 Jul 2010 9:35 am
Reviewer: SongoftheDarquePhoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    So, does the magic react only when Harry is IN danger, or when he BELIEVES he's in danger..? If its the later having him develop an anxiety disorder would be... interesting, to say the least.

    Author's Response:

    Now there's an idea, and this is the reason I like reviews so much.  I was stuck with writers block, and now I have a direction to go.  Thanks,

     

    -JATomlinson 

Title: A Castle Christmas 09 Jul 2010 9:45 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, what a lovely Christmas! It's so wonderful of Severus to give Harry a happy holiday. It was very sweet of Harry to worry over what to give his father and the solution with the cookies seemed perfect. I'm sure the elves didn't mean to ruin things, but I can understand why Harry would be so devastated. But Severus handled the situation perfectly. I'm sure they'll both laugh at the memory one day.

    Disturbing that Quirill has the cloak though. I wouldn't want to be him when Severus discovers the truth!
Title: A Castle Christmas 26 Jun 2010 2:00 pm
Reviewer: sayuri20 (Signed) [Report This]
    A very nice story with an original - non canon - idea and my favourite characters. I'm looking forward to the discoverx of the assassin and the developing garry's and severus' bond!
Title: A Castle Christmas 16 Jan 2010 7:21 am
Reviewer: firefly5151 (Signed) [Report This]
    I am really loving this story. I think I started reading it a while ago, but couldn't find it again after that time. I'm glad I found it again because it had been updated quite a bit since then. I'm hoping you continue with it.

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