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Title: Detention Served 09 Jun 2023 4:33 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, sad ending, indeed.
Title: Detention Served 08 Jan 2020 10:34 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear a sad story but very well done thank you
Title: Detention Served 12 Aug 2010 3:30 am
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting and original plot idea. I loved the Harry/Snape interaction and I thought your portrayal of the characters was complex, vivid and true to canon
Title: Detention Served 01 Jan 2010 4:00 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Sounds interesting. I'll be sure to read the sequel.
Title: Detention Served 28 Nov 2009 1:09 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    This is good, though it is a bit out of character I think for Harry to tell Sev so much about his family, and for Snape to accept it as truth.
    Good idea with Snape trying to accio the wand! ;)

    Author's Response:

    Well, Harry was quite annoyed, especially as Snape continually calls him a liar. Not to mention Harry's short temper.... Besides, between the two, an explosion was inevitable.

    Thanks!

Title: Detention Served 08 Oct 2009 10:31 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just read the story posted after this one. Now I find out it was a sequel. This explains the second story much better. Maybe I missed the warning that the other made more sense if you read this one first.

    Author's Response:

    I would hope it would make more sense to read them reversed :) After all, that's how I had them written... Hope you enjoyed it regardless!

     

    ~Elke

Title: Detention Served 04 Oct 2009 5:10 pm
Reviewer: AmazingGrace36 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the ending! It seems a little unrealistic that Harry would be able to explicitly state he's been "abused." I would think he'd know he's been treated badly and has been a house elf for years, but not connect those ideas with abuse. Other than that, you might want to consider a break between each paragraph to make it a little easier to read. Fantastic story! I can't wait to read the sequel!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much for the review!

    Now, in answer: I figure that by the time Harry reaches 5th year, he would realize that something was wrong with the Dursleys, and connect the dots. Also, I made them come out slightly more abusive than the books. Well, the concept is the same, just more severe.

    And I hope you enjoy the sequel just as much :)

    ~Elke

Title: Detention Served 04 Oct 2009 2:08 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I remember reading this. The end got me again! I am curious about the sequel. Mila

    Author's Response:

    Haha, so I'm guessing you're a fanfic reader/writer too? And I'm glad that I can make mystery for someone who's read the story before :)

    Enjoy the sequel, and thanks.

    ~Elke



    Author's Response:

    Haha, so I'm guessing you're a fanfic reader/writer too? And I'm glad that I can make mystery for someone who's read the story before :)

    Enjoy the sequel, and thanks.

    ~Elke

Title: Detention Served 04 Oct 2009 2:54 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, how sad, but I'm glad that Snape is finally seeing the real Harry.

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