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Title: Chapter 3 28 Oct 2014 7:31 pm
Reviewer: Post U Later (Signed) [Report This]
    Holy Shit! They're In The Prince Mannor Aren't They? Old & Dusty To Say The Least.

    & Poor Harry, Having Another Vision So Close To The Last One. But At Least Now Snape Knows What They're Like. Right? Maybe He'll Go Easy On Harry From Now On? Doubtful.

    & The House Cleaning As A Punishment? Pfft, Harry's Killer At Cleaning House. He's Almost Better Than A House Elf.... Though, That's Decidedly Not A Good Thing.
Title: Chapter 2 28 Oct 2014 7:07 pm
Reviewer: Post U Later (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Just Great, Fucking Voldemort. The Snake Faced Bastard! Why'd He Have To Call Now?

    & Wow, Harry Sure Was Laying It On Thick. He Even DISMISSED SNAPE! I Actually Guffawed Out A Laugh At That One. XD

    Though I Agree With Harry, What Was Mrs. Weasley Thinking? I'm Not Sure What The Emergency Was, But Really? Snape Was The Best Option? What About Tonks? Snape Hates Harry, & Just Like Now, What If He's Called? He'll Be Forced To Leave & Leave The 2 Alone!
Title: Chapter 1 28 Oct 2014 6:49 pm
Reviewer: Post U Later (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Merlin, Poor Harry! I Can't Imagine How Terrible He Feels. He's In A Catch 22. He Needs Sirius To Help Over Come The Guilt, But It's Because Of Sirius That He's Overcome With Guilt. The Poor Boy.

    & I Know This Is A Story Where Snape Helps Harry, But Damn It Snape! You Are Not Helping!
Title: Chapter 3 15 Dec 2013 3:31 am
Reviewer: Elizabeth Severine Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    PLEASE CONTINUE!!!! I like your writing style and would love to read more of this.
Title: Chapter 3 02 Jun 2011 2:53 am
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) [Report This]
    OOOH PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Also please have Hermione and Harry get together please! They make such an awesome, super-couple!!
Title: Chapter 3 15 Oct 2009 2:05 am
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed) [Report This]
    This is very exciting. I can't wait to find out what happens to Harry. And I'd really like to see some more interaction between Hermione and Snape.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I should have an update within the week. There will be a bit of interaction between Hermione and Snape coming up...if not in the next chapter, in the following!
Title: Chapter 3 14 Oct 2009 12:09 am
Reviewer: maybell (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think you're doing a good job of portraying Harry as emotionally all over the place. While Snape as yet appears to have few redeeming features, I'm looking forward to seeing where you take the story. The good spelling and punctuation make it enjoyable to read.

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you are enjoying it! Give Snape some time, he'll come around.
Title: Chapter 3 13 Oct 2009 6:08 am
Reviewer: Doxie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow -- I really like that you are giving your plot time to build. It is allowing for some character depth to develop that would be lacking if you hadn't taken your time.

    I hope that we will see a slight softening of Snape now that he has begun to understand what Harry has been facing.

    I also hope that Harry stops pushing his friends away (even out of altruism) because we all know he is strongest with them by his side.

    I look forward to seeing where you take this.

    Author's Response: Thank you! We will start to see Snape soften, but it's a process...he has had years to fuel the fury, so to speak, and it will take a few challenges before they are able to be amicable. I'm glad you're enjoying this so far, I hope you continue to do so!
Title: Chapter 2 12 Oct 2009 3:02 am
Reviewer: HPnewreader (Signed) [Report This]
    awesome
Title: Chapter 2 04 Oct 2009 8:15 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Ugh! Cliffhanger, :(
    Don't make me beg, please update soon!

    Author's Response: I won't make you beg!! I'm about halfway through with the next chapter, so expect it by the weekend at the latest! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, glad to know someone's reading. :)

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