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Title: Unintentional Mistake 12 Oct 2009 8:38 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You want a review?

    You got it!

    Kissing while brewing a potion, Harry Albus Snape you should know better than that! You're just asking for an accident - and what about your precious girlfriend? Bet you didn't think of the consequences concerning her, did you? What if a Kelpie decides to kidnap her? What are you going to do then?

    ::laughs::

    I am greatly looking forward to the next chapter. Oh, boy, I wonder how Severus will react to his son's antics. Funny, I'm sure the man had taught Harry better than that...

    We'll just say Philip's taking a prolonged vacation...

    Update soon.

    I am really looking forward to more.

    Always yours,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response:

    He'll go and call his dad, LOL!

    Really.

    Actually Phil is visiting his family, since I thought Halloween has great signifgance to vampires.

    Oh he did and he won't be so happy with him.

    I have updated this for real, the other update with Return to Prince Manor was a mistake, I accidentally clicked the Add New Chapter button and uploaded the next chapter of this instead, as soon as I realized my mistake, I deleted it, but it had already updated. 

     

    Anyway, hope you like the next part!

Title: Unintentional Mistake 12 Oct 2009 4:21 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww! Harry really ought to know better, kissing while brewing, but he's a kid . . .he's bound to do something foolish. I'll bet Sev and Lily exchanged kisses over a cauldron too at that age. They're so sweet! Update soon!

    Author's Response: You know . . .they probably did and Sev just doesn't want to admit it.
Title: Unintentional Mistake 12 Oct 2009 4:14 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful start to this one, I'm so excited! I love a good Halloween story! But I do feel bad for Harry though, it's hard losing a loved one on a holiday.

    Author's Response: It is, it really is! Poor Harry! And poor Sev too!
Title: Unintentional Mistake 11 Oct 2009 2:35 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    You are fustrating. But I can't say much more as I've left Runner hanging for so long. I liked it though, a good first chapter.

    Author's Response: Yeah, I know.  But the good thing is, I've updated again! So now you can see what's going on Halloween night.
Title: Unintentional Mistake 11 Oct 2009 2:32 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful first chapter, I really should have read Prince Manor first--oh well! I'll do it later, the 'new story' sparkle effect dragged me in.

    I loved it and I hope you update soon! Thanks for sharing Snapegirl! ^_^

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, Scorpia! Yeah, but this one is kind of a stand alone, so you could always catch up on Heir to Prince Manor and Return to Prince Manor later.

    I have just updated this, so please check it out!

Title: Unintentional Mistake 11 Oct 2009 1:20 am
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed) [Report This]
    Exciting! I look forward to finding out what happened to the potion. Although Harry should know better than to snog his girlfriend when she's brewing potions. After all he shouldn't do anything in the potion lab that he doesn't want his father to see because Snape could walk in at any minute.

    Author's Response:

    That's so true, and he DOES know better.  But his affection for his girlfriend just ran away with him. And now they're both going to regret it. 

    Oh and I have updated this one, there was a problem with RPM, I accidentally clicked the Add Chapter button for that and that's why it updated.  Sorry for the confusion.

    Next chapter the fun--danger--starts!

Title: Unintentional Mistake 10 Oct 2009 3:15 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Why do I get the feeling that Snape is going to be pissed!!!

    Nice start Snapegirl. Aw, Harry and Katie kissing. Too cute.

    I can't wait for Snape's appearance. I have a feeling there are going to be fireworks!

    Author's Response:

    Well, he won't be too happy, that's for sure. 

    But he does deal with teenagers, so he knows what they're like.

    Hormones hormones! LOL!

Title: Unintentional Mistake 10 Oct 2009 2:54 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    So cute! I love it! Please write more, I'm dying to know how this turns out!

    Author's Response: Okay and I have written more, so go and read it. I think it'll be longer than I intended.
Title: Unintentional Mistake 10 Oct 2009 2:34 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it! The quote from Macbeth was great. Trust Harry to know that one. This is a great start to a Halloween story. I can't wait to see what happens!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I lov Macbeth and that quote just seemed to fit. And it's so popular, of course Harry would remember it.
Title: Unintentional Mistake 10 Oct 2009 2:24 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww that's a great beginning! They're such a cute couple. I also liked how you pointed out that Harry wouldn't like Halloween because of Lily and James dying on it. It makes sense. Can't wait to see what happens next!

    Author's Response: Good, I'm glad you think so. Kristeh also mentioned that as well. I always thought it was odd that Harry never spent a moment considering what happened on that night, it was so horrible. And Katie and Harry are sweet, you'll see more of them in the next part.

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