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Reviews For The Last Goodbye
Title: Chapter One 26 Oct 2009 6:53 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice.

    Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! ^_^
Title: Chapter One 21 Oct 2009 2:04 pm
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    aww that was so sweet, very sad but sweet - and it opened the door for severus a bit too which is nice (I do love it when Harry's perceptions about him are shattered ^-^)
    I thought you write it really well, nice atmosphere and a lot of emotion for a halloween fic, very nice ^-^
    have fun x

    Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^ Isn't it fun to shatter Harry's original thoughts? Lol, =) I'm really glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter One 21 Oct 2009 6:17 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    I honestly don't know where to begin. I love the mystery behind the 'myth'. You built it up beautifully. And how Snape visit's Lily's and James's gaves every year to update them on Harry is doing was simply touching.

    And all through the very emotional scene with Harry and his parents you manage to keep Snape in character (I could see him rolling his eyes in the background at times) and have him sighing in annoyance. Perfect!

    Then of course when they arrive back at the castle Snape is handing out detention and back to being...Snape as though nothing unusual happened.

    Excellent story.

    Author's Response:

    =) Thank you so much! It was such fun to write, so it makes me happy that you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing! ^_^

Title: Chapter One 21 Oct 2009 6:06 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    Wooooohhhh!!! The first ghost story I've read this season! This was beautifully detailed and wonderfully paced, and I got a genuine sense of 'place' in the library, the cottage, and the graveyard. The one criticism I had was Harry's use of "Godric's Hollow" in the Floo. Since that is the name of the town itself, I'd expected him to end up in a public Floo (like in the GH local pub), and I was quite surprised that he actually popped out of the Floo in his family's old cottage without giving more specific directions to the Floo!

    Author's Response: O_O I didn't even realise the Floo thing, ugh. Sorry! Completly slipped my mind, and I'm happy that you mentioned it! Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it, ^_^
Title: Chapter One 21 Oct 2009 5:02 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    This was great1 I loved it! But does that mean that harry could talk to Sirius too after he dies? So then he could quit blaming himself for Sirius' death? You might consider that as a possible story too.

    Author's Response: Hey Snapegirl! Yes, I'd thought of the Sirius idea, (in the first draft he was going to talk to Sirius as well before I decided what time the story would take place). I'm thinking of writing it, but with a different outcome. It's cool that you thought the same thing, lol. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Title: Chapter One 20 Oct 2009 5:54 am
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed) [Report This]
    This was lovely! I got the sense that in a way it brought peace to both Harry and Snape. Harry was able to talk to his parents, and Snape was able to talk to Lily even if it was to talk about her son to her. He probably never wanted the day to come where Harry would come to the graveyard, so he could keep talking to Lily every Halloween. Feel bad for both of them, but this was just lovely.

    Author's Response:

    =) Yes, the story had a certain feel of peace and finality to it as I was writing, I'm glad you sensed it to and it wasn't just me! Lol, thanks so much for reviewing! I'm really glad you enjoyed it, ^_^

Title: Chapter One 20 Oct 2009 2:10 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, is it a compliment to tell you that you had me in tears? That is how it's meant--believe me.

    V.

    Author's Response: LOL! Ever since I read Celebony's stories (which always, always, made me cry) I've wanted to make someone cry by reading my stories, ^_^ It's a huge compliment to me that I've managed to do that, lol. Thank you so much! =)
Title: Chapter One 20 Oct 2009 2:01 am
Reviewer: Jenny70503 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh that was awesome!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it! ^_^
Title: Chapter One 20 Oct 2009 12:11 am
Reviewer: Little-Starling (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was fantastic! Sad, spooky, angsty and original. A Hallowtastic treat :)
    You characterised all of the characters perfectly, especially Severus. He was the perfect mix of snarky and sympathetic.

    I honestly have no constructive criticism to give! Bloody Brilliant :)

    Author's Response: Wow, thank you SO much! I have to give a lot of credit to Kodak, she was brilliant, ^_^ Thank you for reviewing, and I'm really glad you liked it!

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