Thanks for an amazing read. I loved the story title, and the sequel title. Perfectly fitting.
That felt like a very unique way of dehumanizing Harry and putting him in his place. I liked the creative use of the kitchen that we saw before, as well as Snape’s method of communicating with Harry. Very cool. It was an action packed chapter for sure. Thank you.
Wow, that was intense. I love how Severus so skillfully stood up for Harry.
| Title: Best Friends and Broken Noses
| 30 May 2022 12:21 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Unexpected twist in the story! I think Severus was compassionate and helpful, though suitably upset. Ron will take a while to come around.
Ron’s great moment - I loved it! Wonderfully done.
I love how you’ve captured the anxiety and concern Severus is feeling about his newfound son. Thanks for the great story.
This was so nicely done - in keeping with how Harry and Severus currently relate to each other, with touching moments nonetheless. Harry’s gifts (both intentional and unintentional) to Severus were absolutely perfect.
Amazing map! I love that it’s animated. Thank you so much for all the effort you put into the details. I’m so glad that Harry made the choice that he did.
I love the way you’ve captured the tension between Severus and Harry, it makes sense that with Harry’s older age there would be more challenges in bonding. Thanks for the wonderfully long and full chapter.
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