Title: Chapter 4: Full Moon Ritual
| 19 Nov 2009 7:35 pm
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Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Oh, I loved that line "When Lily threatened to make sure that he never had any other children."
Too funny. Nice chappie Rae
Author's Response: Thanks that line was really inspired! We've recently updated too!
Title: Chapter 3: Why'd He Say That?
| 19 Nov 2009 7:33 pm
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Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Aw, Rosie and Eric sound adorable, but then, you write little children so well.
Why do I have a feeling that there is going to be a battle Royale over Harry!
Author's Response: Oh there is all right! Yeah Sev's kids are really cute!
Title: Chapter 2: James' Reaction
| 19 Nov 2009 7:29 pm
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Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Oh oh!
And it starts. Divorce is never easy, as I well know. Here comes the battle, and poor Harry will be in the middle.
Great job Rae.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! It's going to be a bumpy ride.
Title: Chapter 1: Trouble Comes Unexpectedly
| 19 Nov 2009 7:27 pm
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Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Ooh, Harry is very naughty isn't he? I'm glad that he's forgiven though. What a little scamp. I'm curious to see Rosie and Eric.
Nice start Snapegirl.
Author's Response: Yes, he is. You'll meet Rosie and Eric soon. Severus and Lily will always forgive the little scamp!
Title: Chapter 4: Full Moon Ritual
| 19 Nov 2009 7:18 pm
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Reviewer: Poirot (Signed)
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Good story so far! Can't wait to see how it develops.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot and we have posted another chapter!
Title: Chapter 4: Full Moon Ritual
| 19 Nov 2009 6:36 pm
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Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Remus and Cissy I never would have thought. And Bella and Lucius, now those two deserve each other! I love the Lupin children, they're really sweet and I can't wait to see what else goes on. I'm sure Remus can help the Snapes settle James down. I like how Remus has a good supporting wife and he's also a wolf Animagus.
Author's Response: Thanks, wewanted to try something different here and this was what we came up with.
Title: Chapter 3: Why'd He Say That?
| 19 Nov 2009 6:22 pm
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Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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I love how Severus explained things to Harry and the other two little Snapes are adorable! Can't wait to see what happens next in this! It's very imaginative.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Title: Chapter 2: James' Reaction
| 19 Nov 2009 6:14 pm
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Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Wow! This story is just full of surprises. A good Voldemort and wicked crazy Albus. And James really is an ass, making poor Harry so upset. I feel bad for him. Way to go Lily!
Author's Response: Yes, james doesn't think he just does and says whatever he wants. Glad you're enjoying this.
Title: Chapter 1: Trouble Comes Unexpectedly
| 19 Nov 2009 6:05 pm
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Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Aww so sweet! I loved the idea that Sev and Lily are apothecaries and Harry is just too cute as well as a real mischief maker. It was a good thing the potion wasn't more volatile, it could have blown up the whole shop. Off to read the next part!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
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