| Title: Teddy Bear Hugs
| 09 Jan 2010 12:22 am
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| Reviewer: Kirra (Anonymous)
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Such an incredible story, please keep going! I love how you've characterized all of them without changing their basic canon personalities.
Aww, poor Draco! He really needs a teddy to hug and Rosie was so sweet to give him hers. He'll also need a lot of therapy to get over what happened.
I love how Lily and Severus work together as parents.
I'm glad they told Dora the truth about what happened to her dad and she accepted it well and gave Severus a hug too. He really needed one.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Poor Draco. I do hope that being with the Snape family will help him to cope with the horrors that he witnessed. I can understand why being near one of the Black women would be difficult for him and it's probably best that he be given some room to mourn away from them. He simply cannot cope with their strong resemblance to Bellatrix.
| Title: A Visit From Aunt Tuney & Uncle Vernon
| 06 Jan 2010 5:10 pm
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| Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed)
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I love the new Dursleys and it's nice to see the two sisters getting along and also all the children (well except for LV and Rosie) and the decision to play both kinds of sports was very smart! Great job the both of you! Update soon!
| Title: A Visit From Aunt Tuney & Uncle Vernon
| 06 Jan 2010 2:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I liked the Dursley's in your story as everything else is AU they should be too! Thank you for updating
| Title: A Visit From Aunt Tuney & Uncle Vernon
| 03 Jan 2010 8:44 am
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| Reviewer: Trimelda (Anonymous)
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Hey girl, you go ahead and publish NICE stories about Harry's life and the Dursleys! I kind of like reading about how things should have been for our favorite young wizard named Harry. Don't mind all those dunderheads who think otherwise.
| Title: A Visit From Aunt Tuney & Uncle Vernon
| 01 Jan 2010 6:48 am
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| Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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Good chapter, but I think you might try working on showing instead of telling, and not repeating yourself. For example, you could have left the statement saying that Eric went to peer out the window. The fact that he wanted to be the first to see the Dursleys was implied. Trust yourself as a writer; you can get the message across without needing to explain what every action and gesture means. Well written actions speak for themselves.
| Title: Happy Birthday Harry
| 31 Dec 2009 5:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Finally James is getting a clue, it's all about your kid, not you! OMG, I'm rhyming. I never do that! Anyway, loved the whole thing and especially the kitten. AWW!
I'm not worried about the differences from canon Dursleys, because Lily is alive and perhaps could have made peace with Petunia at some point and with time often comes understanding. Also, in canon, the Dursleys were forced to take Harry in and that could make a huge difference. Hard to say. Great chapter!
| Title: A Visit From Aunt Tuney & Uncle Vernon
| 31 Dec 2009 2:07 pm
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| Reviewer: -NightRise- (Signed)
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nice......
Happy 2010!!!!!!!!
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