this was very sad... this was indeed a horror story.
That was so sad. I couldn't believe that Harry died.
Was he Harry Potter? I guess there wasn't a scar yet, but surely Severus would have noticed if he looked like James?
Very sweet, and very sad. :(
Wow. Very unusual and a very powerful story. You captured everyone perfectly, even if it was a different environment from the Wizarding world... and so sad! It's still catching up with me just now... Great story.
Wow.
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| 06 Dec 2009 5:18 am
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| Reviewer: Bil (Signed)
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Wow. Oh, poor Severus. What a beautifully written story. You did such a good job of drawing me in, making me love the characters - and then you went and slugged me in the gut. Well done on delivering a very skillful emotional story. I loved the way you laid out this AU, with Severus finding Harry and the Weasleys living upstairs, it was beautiful. Really really well done.
| Title: Ripples
| 03 Dec 2009 8:09 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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OH that was so sad, I liked it but it was so sad. Did you know a baby that had died of this if so I am so sorry.....
Hell. That was... damn, you made me cry ^^
Amazingly well written and gorgeous and lovely for the most part but that was just so SO sad. Especially Sev's reaction to Harry's... body. I've known people this has happened to - far too many of them, especially when one seems too many - and you wrote the end fantastically but damn, did he have to die? I kept hoping Sev would wake up and it would be a dream or something but it never happened and... I'm so not crying (heh, I refuse to be crying ^^).
Very beautiful and so very very sad (you know, just in case I hadnt said that already ^^).
Very interesting take on an AU. Loved how the scenes with Weasleys were weaved into the story, and the last episode in the hospital was absolutely heart-breaking.
That was so sad! But very well written! I felt so bad for poor Harry and even worse for poor Severus. You wrote him very well.
Wow. That was a really touching story. I had tears in my eyes when I started reading it, and now as I am writing this review, the tears are streaming down my face. You have a really great talent when it comes to writing. Please write more stories if you think it would be at all possible for you.
*total silence as reader attempts to stop crying* that was so sad! I thought it was going to be a happy ending and then...*begins to wail again*. It was just heartbreaking! But SO well written, I was completely and totally absorbed and I am literally crying. Very well done. I love how you brought all the characters in too. Just out of curiousity; how did Ginny's birth go? Was she and Molly alright?
Excuse me now, I have to go and cry some more. Amazing job.
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