| Title: Chapter 3: Tutoring Potter
| 27 Jul 2014 6:36 am
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| Reviewer: Dysall75 (Signed)
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For a gag gift, Professor Snape should have given her a ball of yawn or a toy mouse. She should have given him a toy bat that moves.
OMG this is awesome!!!!!!
| Title: Prologue: The Sorting
| 10 Jun 2011 10:20 pm
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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| Title: Chapter 2: Getting to Know Harry
| 13 Feb 2010 8:39 am
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| Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed)
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Just reread this story again. I so love it! Please update soon.
wow. such a different take on harry and Sev. You have mr wanting more! please update soon!
~shannon
| Title: Chapter 2: Getting to Know Harry
| 06 Dec 2009 4:20 am
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| Reviewer: Huntresss (Signed)
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Was Harry adopted by Sirius? If not he has no call to be using the Black name. If he was adopted then he has every right to calling Sirius Dad as by adoption he is his father.
So many authors give him the name Black without a good legal basis to support it.
I'd like to think he was adopted... and has a good family of his own to look to for advice and support
Author's Response: Harry was raised from the age of 1 by Sirius, so even if Sirius wasn't his legal guardian and adoptive father (which he is, on both accounts), Harry would have called him Dad and Walburga Memaw.
I'm afraid this one is just too AU for me. I like tension, challenges for Harry and Severus, and it just seems too easy for them (Harry is too smart and powerful--any fic that has all those titles just seems over the top, and then I expect it to be a farce/comedy, which this is not.) I also find that what draws me to Severus and Harry interaction is the slow overcoming of the past, finding common ground, and growing closer gradually.
The writing is good, but the plot choices are not my cuppa.
Good luck with the story.
| Title: Chapter 1: Meet the Parents
| 02 Dec 2009 6:36 am
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| Reviewer: anonamous (Anonymous)
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I'm sorry, really, I just don't like it at all. It seems silly and unreasonable and unrealistic altogether.
| Title: Chapter 2: Getting to Know Harry
| 01 Dec 2009 8:08 am
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| Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
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Hmmm... I was rather disappointed by Snape warming up to Harry so soon. :P Though I definitely don't like the 'mutual hatred' thing, I'd've loved to see how tutoring Harry morphed Snape's attitude towards him. I could deal with the Professor readily agreeing to accept Harry as his apprentice, but the 'apology' and Snape's instant 'oh, okay' attitude was a bit too much. Or maybe, I just like angst, conflicts and tension. :D
| Title: Chapter 1: Meet the Parents
| 01 Dec 2009 7:54 am
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| Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
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Great idea to bring in Sirius' mother (only, her name is spelled 'Walburga'); she spices the story up a little. I do hope to see more of her.
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