| Title: Trouble Awakened
| 27 Feb 2015 4:56 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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I really have to wonder at Lily's insistence in fighting incessantly with Snape. Since nobody knows how long they'll be on this plane-- and it could end without warning-- it would seem better for her to spend quality time with Harry. Something tells me she'll end up regretting her actions when it's too late. All the time she spent fighting, she could have been getting to know her son, and what kind of memories of her will Harry have now? A screaming, shoe-throwing shrew? Whew!
| Title: Attempting to Catch the Elusive
| 27 Feb 2015 4:38 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Oooh, ultra-creepy Voldemort taking over a living body like that! It'll be interesting to see what he manages to do with it, now that he's got it. And poor Lily, stuck in that other plane-- along with the others now? Can they all get out?
| Title: Reviewing Family Matters
| 27 Feb 2015 1:32 am
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Truly enjoyed Minerva's story about Severus and Lily-- you captured the two young people very well!
| Title: A Series of Unfortunate Events
| 26 Feb 2015 10:03 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Excellent! Lots of drama! I liked the reunion between Sirius and Aberforth-- good emotion for Sirius. And now Harry has disappeared... maybe. I thought it was great the way everyone kept poking at the empty bed! And then there's the inevitable tangling up of Severus with Sirius over Harry. We'll see how this plays out...
| Title: Blurring the Paradigms
| 26 Feb 2015 9:41 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Loved Sirius' rescue! I'm wondering if the Animagus will encounter the fisherman in a future chapter? Glad that Harry got rescued and the wizards finally know how bad it was for him at Privet drive. And what about the mask...
| Title: Clouding the Past
| 26 Feb 2015 2:55 am
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Hmm... I'm intrigued! What did Minerva see? And I find it interesting that Lily was adopted by Minerva (and hilarious that Petunia refused to be adopted by anyone magical). Can't wait to see what happens with the mask!
Severus Snape you are a bastard. how dare you sit there and demand respect form harry when you have done nothing but disrespect him since he has met you!!!! you need to earn his respect. this is a really really great chapter. i cant wait for the next chapter. thank you so much for writing this story for us. its really really appreciated. :)
| Title: Unveiling of Secrets
| 19 Mar 2014 4:41 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Enjoying your unique approach to this story! I did notice an incorrect word in the first quarter of this chapter: "clambered" means "climbed". I believe you meant to use "clamored" (to make a loud noise; in this context, they were all talking at once). It's the sentence where Snape says "Enough" in bold-faced italics. (Well, you asked for people to let you know if they spotted errors! Hee!) But the story is great, and I can't wait to find out about the mystery of the mask!
Please finish soon can't wait to see the rest of the story
Please finish this. Do lily and snape make up in the end. Will Harry end up liking his father? Will lily be free. Don't give up on this story.
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