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Reviews For Blood Magic
Title: Mutual Distrust 25 Jan 2011 8:19 am
Reviewer: topsell (Signed) [Report This]
    Honestly, there's just so much going on here - wonderful characterization, backstory after backstory after backstory, plot and a lot of hints for what's to come! The slow developing relationship between Harry and Severus is honestly something that works well at your pace. The two of them are so pig headed and the way you're working in their growing relationship is extremely well done.

    At the same time, the amount of charicterization that you're accomplishing with Lupin - seeing him in a new light via his opinions, dialogue, reaction to Harry's relationship with Severus - makes him an extremely well written character that adds to the plot as a whole. Lupin's 'insight' into how Harry should handle Snape shows another facet of how things can be constrewed if only given certain facts. Harry's frustration with the same problem - with Lupin and other adults as a whole - makes this little bit of irony very well placed and written.
Title: Mutual Distrust 03 Mar 2010 10:15 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I've been reading this, and I keep forgeting to tell you that I love it. When I have time to review I just skip to the next chapter to keep reading. It is now 3:15(am) and I need to go to bed but your story is so good (and funny!) that I keep reading.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for the kind words (and I apologize for replying months later!) This is one of the best compliments a writer can get, I think. :-)

    There will be a little more in this universe soon. 

Title: Mutual Distrust 03 Jan 2010 4:04 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg!! This was the best chapter yet. I just loved the blunt talk about sex between Harry and Snape, and Harry and Remus.

    Oh, and Snape saying to Harry that it was not a very fatherly response, was too cute. So, he's subtlety admitting to Harry that he is starting to feel fatherly towards him.

    Snape is obsessed with Harry's wardrobe, isn't he? LOL!

    Author's Response: I somehow can't imagine either of them being easily embarrassed by that. ;-)
Title: Mutual Distrust 18 Dec 2009 10:35 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    And...Snape has to get used to reacting differently to Harry. Not easy for him, so he has to edit what he says...
Title: Mutual Distrust 18 Dec 2009 3:07 am
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed) [Report This]
    Intriguing information about long ago school days here! My, my - Remus certainly did get around didn't he?!?!
Title: Mutual Distrust 18 Dec 2009 2:21 am
Reviewer: petuniac3 (Signed) [Report This]
    Love Snape, Love Harry, Remus is on my last nerve

    Author's Response:

    Ah well. He's less on edge later.....

    I'm glad you're liking Harry and Snape, anyway! 

Title: Mutual Distrust 18 Dec 2009 1:36 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ha! Have I mentioned I'm really enjoying this story? I keep realizing that I can hop over to schnoogle and read it all the way through because man I am getting impatient for the entire story to unfold. I'll *try* to be patient, but no promises.

    I am having loads of fun with Remus in this; I love that he's taking all sorts of things from that ring Harry's got and that he's chatting sex with Harry so blithely. LOL Snape too actually. And loved the, "Not a very fatherly response" bit. Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response:

    This has a few punctuation improvements, but yeah.

     

    Remus is kind of hoping that if he talks, Harry will talk.... 


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