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Reviews For Blood Magic
I feel bad for Harry, getting scolded twice in one night. :( He's so cute though, and reckless. Perfectly in character. You write them all so well. Author's Response: She's worried about him, but yes -- definitely uptight. Thank you!
Author's Response: I hope you enjoy it! Thanks for the comment.
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I'm enjoying the complicated H/Hr relationship as well. Author's Response: Severus has some problems with expressing positive emotions, doesn't he? ;-)
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'Tis an adverb. Author's Response: Well, no. If it was an adverb, it would modify the verb. I want the verb to connect the subject to a modifier, so I'm using "act" in the sense of "seem to be", for which my unabridged dictionary gives the example of "he acted angry". "He acted angrily" would be a perfectly valid sentence, but it would mean something else -- that the subject acted with anger. Similarly, I would tend to read "he was acting suspiciously" as "he was acting with or from suspicion". Harry is appearing suspicious (in the sense of being worthy of suspicion), so the form I want really is "he was acting suspicious." |
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