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Title: Distrust 25 Mar 2016 2:01 am
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Several great quotes- "You're a fine lad" "Feed you regular meals..." "I glossed over that .." I though it was interesting that Severus refers to Hermione as a mudblood in his thoughts at one point - realistic given his background in this story.
Title: Distrust 19 Aug 2014 1:51 pm
Reviewer: xikum (Anonymous) [Report This]
    There are times I really feel like wringing Ron's neck. He really deserves it this time. I guess that's why I had such a hard time believing JKR that he's truly Harry's best friend - or thinking that if it is the case, Harry doesn't need enemies, given how he treated Harry in canon, on a few occasions!
Title: Distrust 07 Jan 2010 6:09 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, and also, Severus' reaction to Hermione was interesting. Just the fact that he appreciated that Hermione was more understanding, and she's a Muggleborn, as opposed to Ron, who is a Pureblood.

    I found that introspection interesting.
Title: Distrust 07 Jan 2010 5:08 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh that's so sweet. Severus is scared that Harry is leaving. He's really starting to care about him. I love also how attuned that Severus has become to Harry's thoughts and feelings, and he's beginning to care about his needs also. He's beginning to think like a father. (Oops, don't tell Sev that I said that!!)

    Love this chapter. Full of deep emotion and an indepth study of both Harry andSeverus' characters.
Title: Distrust 02 Jan 2010 11:31 am
Reviewer: Kyleigh (Anonymous) [Report This]
    After a quite a few years in the fanfiction world I have given up on reviewing everything... your story demanded that I come back and review. It is very well written. Entertaining, unique, wonderful colourful, believable characters... your style keeps the reader hooked and wanting for more (thank goodness you update quickly) :). I apprectiate the time and effort you have taken on this story and I feel that I ought to congradulate you. Well Done.

    I can't wait until we have Snape's reaction to Harry's tight leather pants. Draco's change from antagonstic to being on friendly terms with Harry was very realistic. Don't often see that in fanfiction.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! I'm terribly flattered.

    While I was writing this I usually posted every week or two. It took a year and a half, but I wanted all the changes gradual enough to be believable. 

Title: Distrust 02 Jan 2010 4:12 am
Reviewer: dancegirl01mom (Signed) [Report This]
    love reading this again as you post it here!

    Author's Response:

    :-)

     

    Glad you're enjoying it! 

Title: Distrust 02 Jan 2010 2:26 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aw, that as was a difficult read. :o( It's so real though, the way they can't really get along although they try so hard. And I'm glad that Severus felt shame after he realizes he hurt Harry. His anger beforehand was palpable. And it was so heartbreaking that he's so relieved that Harry wants to come back. Ack, I just love this story.

    Author's Response:

    Now that Harry isn't just a student, Severus is having a harder time controlling how he treats him -- not that he's ever been really great at that, but he cares now, and he doesn't want to be like his father. There are things going on here that he won't even think.

    Glad you're enjoying it! 

Title: Distrust 01 Jan 2010 8:33 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I know why Severus is worried about Harry's continued association with Remus, but Harry thinks of Remus as family and is very loyal to those he loves. Severus will never be able to change Harry's mind, only Remus' behavior will.
    I wonder how long it will take for Severus to admit that he loves Harry to Harry. I know that he does and that he has difficulty speaking of such emotions, but Harry needs to know.
    Great chapter!

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