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Reviews For Outcast's Alley
Title: Bastard 29 Dec 2009 10:18 pm
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter! Madame Harlot was amusing and it was nice that Harry's found a crowd that he (sort of) fits in with. Although it will be good wen he's got some more experience and doesn't risk offending anyone with each and every sentence.

    I like that Harry was able to help out with food preparation and make some new friends. Interesting how that skill worked out. I wish he'd eat the raw meat though, he seems to want to, just won't since his mind still objects to it.

    Lily's letter was very interesting and although I think I know how Harry's father is, it will be interesting to see him find out. He shouldn't have dumped the paternity potion, for some reason I think he's going to regret it and maybe even try to brew one himself.

    Great story, I can't wait to find out what happens next!

    Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like!! LOL yeah, poor Harry steps in it a lot. He's trying, though. And yeah, he's still got to get used to the differences in general. He's only had the one day, after all. And I agree - dumping the potion was noble, in a certain way, but kinda dumb, too. Again, glad you like! Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Bastard 28 Dec 2009 3:50 pm
Reviewer: Acop (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I definitely love your story so far !!!!
    Your take on how "creatures" live in the wizarding world is really interesting, i hope to see more of it later :)
    i also can't wait for snape to show up ...

    Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like!! :0)
Title: Bastard 28 Dec 2009 12:04 pm
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    I predict that Harry will be saying 'shit' many more times along with a variety of colourful words when he finds out that Snape, of all people, is his father.

    Thank heavens for chocolate. I do hope he has a very large stash, he'll be needing them.

    Author's Response: LOL yup, I imagine he will. Plus for a lot of other things I've got up my sleeve...hee hee. (I know something you don't know! I know something you don't know! nya nya!) lol yey for being childish. And yey for chocolate! BTW, I recognize your screen-name from another website. (The fanfiction community is a lot smaller than it seems sometimes!!) I believe you also know me as someonenotme?
Title: Bastard 28 Dec 2009 2:36 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm....interesting. Harry STILL doesn't know who his father is!

    This story is very intriguing. I can't wait for Harry to discover who his dear old dad is! LOL!

    Author's Response: Nope, he doesn't. :0) Glad you like so far!! Thanks for the review!
Title: One of Those 26 Dec 2009 11:55 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Whow......what is he??? Poor Harry everything happens to him. Nice writing.

    Author's Response: Yey! Glad you like! Thanks!
Title: One of Those 22 Dec 2009 8:45 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Boring? That was anything BUT boring! I love it!

    Author's Response: YAY!!!!! Glad you like!!! I was really kinda worried about this one - I'm not used to writing with so little dialogue. So thanks for reassuring me!! Yey!! lol okay that's enough exclamation points for one review response, I think. Thanks for reviewing!! Okay two more...anyway thanks again.
Title: One of Those 21 Dec 2009 7:25 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story so far! You really have me interested in the next chapter! Pleasu update soon.

    Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like!! I was a little worried about this chapter, honestly - I'm not used to writing with so little dialogue. The next chapter should be up soonish - a week or so? Thanks for the review!!!
Title: One of Those 21 Dec 2009 2:51 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Good start not too much but enough back story to make sure it is all clear thanks for this story but i do hope "Talking hat" will continue as I love that stroy

    Author's Response: Yey!! And no worries for 'LDTH' - I'm going to publish one more chapter of this story before resuming that one, but then I'll be working on the next chapter of it. Glad you like my fics!! Thanks so much for reviewing!!
Title: One of Those 21 Dec 2009 7:52 am
Reviewer: hbxf (Signed) [Report This]
    I love your story. I would like to see what happens next. I'm curious how Severus gets involved and what Harry is. Can't wait for the update.

    Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like!! Update should be up soonish. (A week??) Rhiannan
Title: One of Those 21 Dec 2009 2:58 am
Reviewer: Ash (Signed) [Report This]
    Not boring at all!

    I love creature fics and am really eager to read more about this one. It seems you are about to explore some unknown parts of the Wizarding World and that is my favorite kind of story. Looking forward to more, thanks so much!

    Author's Response: Yey!! Thanks!! I was actually really worried about that, so it's wonderful to hear that you don't find it boring. And yes, I'm definitely going to be exploring a different aspect of "wizarding culture", and/or magical culture that's separate from wizarding culture. LOL we'll see. I have a definite idea of my plot, but I also have much more fun writing, and write better, if I keep the details a little vague until it comes time to write them. Glad you like the chapter, and I hope you continue to enjoy it. You're very welcome!! I love writing!!

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