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Title: The One 15 Dec 2010 8:36 am
Reviewer: Rosa Mundi (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh. My. Goodness. I can't believe you did that, and I can't believe I don't hate that you did that. Darn, you're a good writer. (These do get tagged with what chapter we're commenting on, I hope?)
Title: One of Those 15 Dec 2010 7:56 am
Reviewer: Rosa Mundi (Signed) [Report This]
    Whoa. That's a heck of a beginning. I can't wait to read on & see where this is going (and I am very thankful that this is a completed story).
Title: Delinquent 01 Dec 2010 8:06 am
Reviewer: Ravenel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You have the right to be happy, proud, ecstatic, any form of joy or what so else because this is an AMAZING story. I love it. I REALLY hope it continues in a sequel or what so else.
Title: His Highness 22 Aug 2010 4:01 am
Reviewer: H20girl (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love the beginning...Snape had just agreed to give Tobias/Harry a few days before taking action against Umbridge's use of a Blood Quill. Yet Tobias/Harry, rather than focus on Snape's recent agreement, is immediately worried about the conflict he expects when Umbridge comes in to get him for her detention. I'd love to see Snape's face when he first laid eyes on Umbridge (after he had just learned she was using torture in her detentions.) I imagine it was the ultimate in "If looks could kill..." So much happening in so few lines. Well written!

    And when he gets to the library that night, Cassandra Carson wants to know if he is who she thinks he just might be...so three different people in one day recognize Harry/Tobias as Tobias-she. Very cool. I am very curious about Andra - is she fae but able to totally hide her People-ness? Are her tattoos an attempt to be more like Fae? She knows more than most...obviously. Oh well, I will humbly wait until all things are revealed about Andra.

    Regarding the first interaction with Umbridge in this chapter, thank you for developing her fear as well as her prejudice against Non-Humans. It makes more sense this way...never really thought about it when reading the 5th book. So she's not just a bully, she's a uber-cowardly, bullying, torturing bigot. Well done! And Tobias/Harry's shallow bow is delicious 'icing on the cake' for that scene! You deserve a nice Lolly for that!

    Thanks for showing Flitwick's and Sprout's response/attitude toward Tobias/Harry -basically- not doing his schoolwork. Can anything be done to help the boy? How about a Quick-Quotes Quill? Or hire Molly to help as-needed with Mo? Will Tobias/Harry's struggle with school make leaving Hogwarts seem like a better idea - to Tobias/Harry or to Mohira or to Dumbledore? But then how will Voldemort get his prophecy from the Ministry, if Tobias/Harry is time-zones away?

    Thanks so much for sharing your story! It's so much fun to read and re-read!

    Anyway, what I REALLY want to know is if the Court will show up sooner than Tobias/Harry expected, due to being tipped off by Miram Wira or someone else via the Hogwarts Gossip Line?

    And I really, really love Harry/Tobias' attitude when Mo is have crying jags. When I was a new mom, between the hormones and lack of sleep I could understand (though NEVER excuse) how someone could physically hurt a crying baby. I see Tobias/Harry as not having to deal with the hormones, and the lack of sleep is a new thing, so his love for Mo more readily overcomes the frustration of not being able to console her. And my new favorite lines from this story are: "“I know, baby,” he whispered. “It's awful, isn't it? Totally worth screaming your fool head off over.”"

    Please keep feeding the muse, and writing this story. Oh, how I await the next chapter! i check the story multiple times a day, and even refresh the browser 'just in case' you updated while I was re-reading this story!

    Author's Response: LOL thanks so much for the lovely loooooong review!! I had a lot of fun reading it. And sorry the update is taking so long - I had writer's block, and then I had to move back into my school-year apartment and sign up for classes and such. Thanks again!! Enjoy the next!! Rhiannan
Title: Delinquent 21 Aug 2010 9:48 pm
Reviewer: H20girl (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love it! So, Zabini is some sort of royal fae, even as Malfoy is nobility. Usually I hate the 'royalty' stories but this is great! i wonder if somehow Snape is connected to the Court, and he is going to let the King & Queen know Harry/Tobias is in some danger from Umbridge. Also, I wonder if Zabini is a real, honest 'good guy' or a peer who is only out for himself. Can't wait to read your next chapter...just had to review first!

    Author's Response: Yey, glad you like!! Thanks so much for taking the time to review!! I'm really enjoying reading them!!
Title: His Highness 19 Aug 2010 11:51 pm
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it! Can't wait for the next update! Can't wait to see what happens next! I'd still like to see Harry staying at Hogwarts, but have a feeling that this isn't where you're taking the story. Great work though, I am totally engaged in this original fic!

    Author's Response: Hehee. Glad you like!! (But my no says nuffing. My keeps secret!) :0) LOL don't ask. Thanks for the review!!
Title: His Highness 14 Aug 2010 4:05 pm
Reviewer: Louise (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Here's what I think about it: WOW-WOW-WOW!

    Author's Response: Heeee! [Happy squeal] Glad you like!!
Title: His Highness 14 Aug 2010 2:36 am
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome! Just awesome! :)

    Poor Tobias/Harry, getting no sleep and not getting his school work done because Mo seems to have confused day and night like many infants do.

    But the spreading of his true identity, and Blaise also being an Heir, and the Selkie, and all the different People at Hogwarts is soooooooo cool!

    I love this story more and more, each time I re-read the different chapters.

    I can't wait for him to tell the Queen and her Consort where exactly he is, and see what they do to Umbridge. What goes around, comes around and she's certainly sown the wind and will reap the whirlwind.

    What I'm looking forward to is when we find out just when Snape is going to be revealed for what and who HE is.... Hee! Soon, I hope!

    Well done! Well done! *imagine me standing in Dumbledore's place in the Great Hall and leading the entire student body in applause for your tale*

    Author's Response: LOL thanks!! I'm so glad you like it so much!! You made me smile. :0)
Title: Hypocrite 13 Aug 2010 6:26 pm
Reviewer: Hayley Farrell (Anonymous) [Report This]
    why did u pot him in Hufflepuff and where did u get the ider 4 this story

    Hayley.Farrell@live.com.au

    Author's Response: Hufflepuff just made the most sense to me. And I'm not quite sure. I wanted to write a creaturefic, and I wanted to write a babyfic, and I sorta just combined the two. :0)
Title: His Highness 12 Aug 2010 7:23 pm
Reviewer: Caliko (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Delicious! :)

    Author's Response: Yey!! Thanks!

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