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Reviews For Outcast's Alley
Title: Delinquent 31 Jul 2010 9:04 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome!!! I looove this story! Thanks so much for the update! Definitely a favorite. I did not see Blaise knowing, but it makes sense why Harry was able to trust him with mo. I wonder if staying away from Mo for such log periods of time hurts Mo, not just make her uncomfortable. I love the drama and the build-up. Harry is really playing with time right now. I wonder what the Court will do to Umbridge once Harry shows them what she did to them. And I can't wait for the showdown between Harry and his new parents. Awesome. I love this story. I can't wait to read more. It's probably my favorite story right now.

    Author's Response: :0) yey!! So glad you like! Thanks for the review!! Hope you enjoy the next chapter!!
Title: Delinquent 31 Jul 2010 9:00 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I actually got to the end of this chapter and GROANED! I was so into reading this chapter that the ending came up unexpectedly. I can not wait to read the next chapter. Great chapter.

    Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you liked so much!! Thanks for the review, and enjoy the next chapter!!
Title: Delinquent 31 Jul 2010 8:31 pm
Reviewer: Louise (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, this is one of my favourite chapters! And I can't wait for Umbitch to get what she deserves... *evil laugh*

    Author's Response: Hehee. Yeah, I'm having a lot of fun with that, too. *joins in evil laugh*. Enjoy the next chapter!!
Title: Delinquent 31 Jul 2010 8:20 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    When is the story line going to hint that this is a severitus or did I miss understand that. Given the story I do like it, but I keep hoping every new chapter that we will see some of that.

    Author's Response: Hmmm...there've been some hints, actually. If you really care, I would re-read chapter 7 especially. Anyway, enjoy the new chapter!!
Title: Delinquent 31 Jul 2010 7:55 pm
Reviewer: Vulpixer (Anonymous) [Report This]
    KYAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!! XD The shit's going to hit the fan!!!! AHHHHH!!!! I can not wait till the next chapter!! The toad bitch is soooooo going to get it! Ohhhhhh!!! Please let it be soon! I have cupcakes and Hello Kitty stickers! *gives in a box with a big bow* Pretty pretty please! ^o^

    Author's Response: LOL Yeyyyyyy!! I LOVE Hello Kitty!! :0) Thanks for the review!! Enjoy the new chapter!!
Title: Liar 29 Jul 2010 5:12 pm
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    Looove it. Just wondering, but where did you come up with the name Illatoby? I love it. What does it mean?

    Author's Response: Thanks!! So glad you like. Illtobe is a name purely out of my imagination. I wanted the shortened version to be 'Toby', but I didn't want him to be Tobias, for obvious reasons. I'd heard the name 'Tobe' before somewhere, and so just modified it to Illatobe. I like it, too. :0)
Title: Liar 28 Jul 2010 8:22 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    “Yeah, but what fun would that be?” he finally said. “I'm the school's new delinquent. This is what I do.”

    Sprout frowned. “You're not a delinquent. That's what is so frustrating.”

    My favorite lines!!! Harry has set a record that even the twins did do. Malfroy an elf, interesting.

    Thank you for your update. Well written chapter. I look forward to your next update.

    Author's Response: Glad you like!! Thanks so much for the review!! And you're very welcome!!
Title: Liar 28 Jul 2010 3:37 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I loved it! Poor Tobias! He really is falling back into what Harry does. He's bringing a lot of attention to himself too. Won't all the students talk about him, won't his existence at the school get sent along to the King and Queen? Very, very interesting story. I love it! Thanks so much for writing and sharing it!

    I did notice one typo in the beginning. “No,” Tobias said confusedly, “no, that's fine. It's a little strange, but if the Headmaster wants it than it's not a problem to me.” than should be then.

    I went and edited the formatting of the last couple of chapters so that they would have paragraph indentations.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, and the edit. I'll go fix it. Also thanks for fixing the formatting. That's really helpful. Glad you like!! Thanks again!
Title: Liar 28 Jul 2010 1:26 am
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter; I loved Harry's discussion with Professor Sprout- you've portrayed her beautifully.

    Author's Response: :0) Thanks!! I'm really glad you like it!! Yeah, I like Sprout, too. I was surprised, because I didn't like her much in Canon, but then when I had to turn her into a more complex character to actually write her, I ended up liking her quite a bit. Dunno why. :0) Thanks for the review!
Title: Liar 27 Jul 2010 11:29 pm
Reviewer: Acop (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really love your story and all your ideas about the people !!!! But I must admit I really can't wait to see more interactions between Harry and Snape, we havn't seen nearly enough of snape for now :)
    Keep the good work gong !!!

    Author's Response: Lol don't worry. Snape will be more involved soon. Thanks for the review! Glad you like!

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