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Title: Chapter Five - A New Ally Appears. 27 May 2022 2:51 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Enjoyable chapter, and very creative twist on Fawkes! I’ve never seen that before.
Title: Chapter Five - A New Ally Appears. 08 Mar 2010 7:42 pm
Reviewer: Raiderhater1013 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oho so Fawkes is not Dumbledore's framilular.

    Author's Response:

    That's right, but Dumbledore doesn't know that...yet. I'm considering having Fawkes choose someone to bond with, but am torn between two individuals. Thanks for the review!

Title: Chapter Five - A New Ally Appears. 17 Feb 2010 5:31 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved it1 I really liked how Fawkes was always Sal's phoenix and the true story behind the Slytherin founder. It makes a lot of sense that he would wish to implement such a hting, because back then most students would have not even known how to read or write, unless they were given training from a monk or priests or were a noble with a private tutor.

    It's sad how people re-write history, but that's true even in real life.

    I'm glad Fawkes is keeping an eye on Dumbledore and hope that he will trust Severus with more information soon.

    Author's Response: I'm really glad you loved it. What Salazar asked for was more than reasonable and made perfect sense. There is nothing saying that the students had to be children either. They could have added another year of training on or something along those lines. Thanks for the lovely review.
Title: Chapter Five - A New Ally Appears. 16 Feb 2010 5:21 pm
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thanks for the update.
    I like the twist with Fawkes, and little Harry sleeping in the kitchen was both cute and a little sad.

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you like Fawkes' arrival and I agree about Harry. It's too bad he didn't realize that Severus and Arabella, unlike his relatives, wouldn't have been angry if he had gone to the door, knocked, and told them he was so tired that he couldn't stay awake. Thanks for the review.

Title: Chapter Five - A New Ally Appears. 13 Feb 2010 8:01 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    I love Fawkes! He is the best ally they can have,

    Author's Response: It's always good to have an insider, particularly one that no one would suspect. Thanks for the review.
Title: Chapter Five - A New Ally Appears. 11 Feb 2010 2:39 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Not a lot of Harry/Severus but good background material thank you

    Author's Response:

    Everything has its reason. They are main characters, but I don't feel obliged to make the story all about them. Thanks for the review.

Title: Chapter Five - A New Ally Appears. 11 Feb 2010 6:08 am
Reviewer: ankita (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i like the story line...though thinking of dumbledore as an evil force...hmm... otherwise i like it!!!!

    Author's Response:

    I guess you will just have to wait and see. Sometimes evil hides in the least obvious places. Thanks for the review.

Title: Chapter Five - A New Ally Appears. 10 Feb 2010 9:14 pm
Reviewer: mworth1019 (Signed) [Report This]
    wowo...great

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I really appreciate it.
Title: Chapter Five - A New Ally Appears. 10 Feb 2010 8:59 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow Good Chapter! Can't wait for the next!!!

    Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.
Title: Chapter Five - A New Ally Appears. 10 Feb 2010 7:19 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thus was a great chapter, I will feel so much better when harry and sev are away from surrey and safe. Loved Falkes role in this!

    Author's Response: They won't be in Surrey much longer. Fawkes demanded a role and I didn't have the heart to deny him. I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks for the lovely review.

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