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Title: Chapter Five - A New Ally Appears. 13 Feb 2010 8:01 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    I love Fawkes! He is the best ally they can have,

    Author's Response: It's always good to have an insider, particularly one that no one would suspect. Thanks for the review.
Title: Chapter Five - A New Ally Appears. 11 Feb 2010 2:39 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Not a lot of Harry/Severus but good background material thank you

    Author's Response:

    Everything has its reason. They are main characters, but I don't feel obliged to make the story all about them. Thanks for the review.

Title: Chapter Five - A New Ally Appears. 11 Feb 2010 6:08 am
Reviewer: ankita (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i like the story line...though thinking of dumbledore as an evil force...hmm... otherwise i like it!!!!

    Author's Response:

    I guess you will just have to wait and see. Sometimes evil hides in the least obvious places. Thanks for the review.

Title: Chapter Five - A New Ally Appears. 10 Feb 2010 9:14 pm
Reviewer: mworth1019 (Signed) [Report This]
    wowo...great

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I really appreciate it.
Title: Chapter Five - A New Ally Appears. 10 Feb 2010 8:59 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow Good Chapter! Can't wait for the next!!!

    Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.
Title: Chapter Five - A New Ally Appears. 10 Feb 2010 7:19 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thus was a great chapter, I will feel so much better when harry and sev are away from surrey and safe. Loved Falkes role in this!

    Author's Response: They won't be in Surrey much longer. Fawkes demanded a role and I didn't have the heart to deny him. I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks for the lovely review.
Title: Chapter Five - A New Ally Appears. 10 Feb 2010 6:02 am
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed) [Report This]
    That's a good idea. People like Hermione wouldn't need to study their brains out every summer just to try and know as much as everyone else. And the little things that Ron and other wizard raised adn born children seem to know, the nusiances of society, could be learned by the less fortunate witches and wizards.

    Author's Response: I agree, which is why I brought it up. It was clear in Canon that Harry was pretty much clueless and he certainly could have used a course in Wizardry Studies. I always wondered why they had a Muggle Studies class, but ignored the students with a lack of knowledge in the Wizardry side of things. Thanks for the review.
Title: Chapter Five - A New Ally Appears. 10 Feb 2010 5:02 am
Reviewer: KKJ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love that Fawkes has been introduced as such a strong character in this. Nice twist.

    Author's Response: I've always felt that Fawkes was far more than met the eye and wanted to explore him a bit.  I'm glad you liked the chapter and thank you for the review.
Title: Chapter Five - A New Ally Appears. 10 Feb 2010 1:59 am
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    good work! I like that Fawkes is actually a sort of spy, get Dumby out of there!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it and that is the long term plan. There's a lot that needs to happen first, though. Thanks for the review.
Title: Chapter Five - A New Ally Appears. 10 Feb 2010 12:20 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I was so happy to see that you updated this story. I really love the truth about Fawkes and Salazar as you have written it. I look forward to seeing what your muse comes up with for the next part of the story. Bravo!

    Author's Response:

    Sorry it took so long, but my muse and I couldn't agree for the longest time. I kept circling back to Fawkes and in the end decided that I had to write some background on the truth about Salazar. Fawkes wanted to be a spy so badly and I couldn't resist his pout. xD I'm glad you like this chapter and I hope that the next won't be as long in the making. Thank you for the lovely review.


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