Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 19 Oct 2022 9:00 am
Reviewer: Treedweller (Signed) [Report This]
    This is an interesting start; but the conversation is a little hard to follow. I cannot tell sometimes who is talking!
Title: Chapter 16 20 Sep 2022 2:21 am
Reviewer: MeAndNotYou1001 (Signed) [Report This]
    It really is so very horrible that a little boy would think something like that and such commonalities exist; a child being uncertain of being loved and kept and having to test boundries in such a way as to find that assurance and some still don't believe. It's heartbreaking.
Title: Chapter 2 01 Jan 2014 9:31 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a very good start to the story
Title: Chapter 22 18 Feb 2011 9:16 am
Reviewer: Shhhh (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story - I liked the realistic portrait of Harry and Snape's relationship - that Snape was fair with discipline and that Harry understood why he was being punished. Thanks! Hope there's more out there!
Title: Chapter 1 10 Jan 2011 1:39 am
Reviewer: topsell (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like the start here! And I adore the end of this chapter - of Snape talking to Lily's photograph. It's quite beautiful imagery.

    Author's Response: Snape loved Lily, so I guess he can indulge himself in the privacy of his room and talk to her. Thanks a lot for reading my story. LL
Title: Chapter 15 29 Dec 2010 1:51 am
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    awww i love seeing the gentle concerned side of Snape

    Author's Response: I like this side of Snape too. Thanks for reading my story. LL
Title: Chapter 2 21 Mar 2010 8:29 pm
Reviewer: Grace (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story would benefit heartily from a beta reader. Also, these are real people speaking, let them use contractions. A lack of any contractions makes the language awkward and stilted.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your comments. I do have a beta, but as you may have realized English is not my first language, I will gladly make changes if you point the mistakes. LL 
Title: Chapter 22 18 Mar 2010 6:19 am
Reviewer: dancegirl01mom (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the story! A sequel would be awesome!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review and for liking my story. I will try to start the sequel soon. LL
Title: Chapter 22 14 Mar 2010 3:12 pm
Reviewer: ankita (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wd love a sequel to it...

    enjoyed reading the story too...

    Author's Response:
    Thank you very much for your review and for liking my story. I will try to start the sequel soon. LL
Title: Chapter 22 14 Mar 2010 7:11 am
Reviewer: Kaasan (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a wonderful story. A sequel would be great if you have the time and inspiration to write one!

    Author's Response:
    Thank you very much for your review and for liking my story. I will try to start the sequel soon. LL

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