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Reviews For The Sound of Silence
Author's Response: Aaaah, thanks to YOU for reading and reviewing! I'll try to keep him IC as far and much as possible. Adjustments have to be made, of course, but this will not be a fluffy Severus story. ;)
Author's Response: Oh, it got you hooked. :D That's awesome! What a compliment! :) Thanks for reading.
Poor Harry--I like how different this is from the normal Snape/Harry fics out there. Author's Response: Hey, thanks! I'll definitely get back to you on that! :) Well, I hope it's different. :) I really wanted to get away from the whole Harry and Snape get along über-well and live happily ever after. Unless it's really well written (like AYLNO btw), I usually just can't see it, but I might end up in the same trap. :P
Author's Response: Or, more precisely, where the story is taking me. That's what usually happens. The characters take over. ;) Thanks for reading!
Update SOON!!! BTW: You need to start a new paragraph when you change Who is speaking. Author's Response: Ack! NO WAY! This means I will have to write more, then, and quickly. A weekend is coming! ;) Thanks for pointing it out, someone else has also reminded me of the formatting. I'll fix it!
"I am not", he pressed, turning away from the hospital bed, "I am merely aware of the problems that might be raised by this." Author's Response: Aaaah, I just can't get this formatting right. Is it just an English thing? I got called on that on my FF.net fic, too. ;) I tried to fix it, but I don't think I have it quite right. I guess action belonging to the sentence would be in one paragraph, right? Thanks for thinking this is unique. The thing about not-hearing is that it kind of rids the victim of speaking, too. I mean, they obviously can't hear themselves so they might be to shy or horrified to keep on talking... but we will see how Harry copes. Thanks again for pointing this out! I'll try to do my paragraphs right in the future and get rid of any grammar mistakes. :) |
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