Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 2 22 Feb 2015 2:24 am
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like this! I'm sorry that I never found it on the site before. I like the concept and I hope that you do eventually come back and write more chapters for this story.
Title: Chapter 2 02 Jun 2010 8:17 am
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    this is great. i hope you have time to update soon. i'd writemuch more but i'm on my cell phone with tiny tinny letters. i really like the idea of deaf harry. i went to uni for the asl interpreter program but sadly it closed while i was there. i am going to take it up again at another college though.
Title: Chapter 2 27 Mar 2010 10:21 pm
Reviewer: Fujoshi (Signed) [Report This]
    Absolutely awesome! Update real soon, cuz I love how IC you make 'em! =)
Title: Chapter 2 16 Mar 2010 10:31 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Like this one thank you so much I'm glad you are keeping Severus IC at the moment

    Author's Response: Aaaah, thanks to YOU for reading and reviewing! I'll try to keep him IC as far and much as possible. Adjustments have to be made, of course, but this will not be a fluffy Severus story. ;)
Title: Chapter 2 12 Mar 2010 5:45 am
Reviewer: Stefunny2010 (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like how this is starting out. I dont really read fics where Harry is deaf and/or blind, but your intro kinda got me hooked;) Great job so far!

    Author's Response: Oh, it got you hooked. :D That's awesome! What a compliment! :) Thanks for reading.
Title: Chapter 1 12 Mar 2010 2:32 am
Reviewer: Helga1967 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very Good start!
Title: Chapter 2 12 Mar 2010 12:53 am
Reviewer: LaileeJane (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really enjoying this! If you need someone to beta/proofread your chapters for you I'd be more than willing to help!

    Poor Harry--I like how different this is from the normal Snape/Harry fics out there.

    Author's Response:

    Hey, thanks! I'll definitely get back to you on that! :)

    Well, I hope it's different. :) I really wanted to get away from the whole Harry and Snape get along über-well and live happily ever after. Unless it's really well written (like AYLNO btw), I usually just can't see it, but I might end up in the same trap. :P

     

Title: Chapter 2 12 Mar 2010 12:13 am
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    This is pretty good, I think that you are off to a great start. I am interested in seeing where you take this story. :-D

    Author's Response:

    Or, more precisely, where the story is taking me. That's what usually happens. The characters take over. ;)

    Thanks for reading! 

Title: Chapter 2 11 Mar 2010 10:54 pm
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Ack! TOO Short!
    Update SOON!!!

    BTW: You need to start a new paragraph when you change Who is speaking.

    Author's Response:

    Ack! NO WAY!

    This means I will have to write more, then, and quickly. A weekend is coming! ;)

    Thanks for pointing it out, someone else has also reminded me of the formatting. I'll fix it!

Title: Chapter 2 11 Mar 2010 10:16 pm
Reviewer: spiritualwitch (Signed) [Report This]
    A few grammar mistakes and such but those can be ignored in favor of the uniqueness of this fic. I've never come acrossa deaf Harry before! Just a tip; when a new person starts speaking, that should start a whole new paragraph. Such as at the end of this chapter when Dumbledore says "You seem quite concerned, my boy." Dumbledore's voice so close to his ears startled the Potions Professor. (this is where you should start a new paragraph)

    "I am not", he pressed, turning away from the hospital bed, "I am merely aware of the problems that might be raised by this."

    Author's Response:

    Aaaah, I just can't get this formatting right. Is it just an English thing? I got called on that on my FF.net fic, too. ;) I tried to fix it, but I don't think I have it quite right. I guess action belonging to the sentence would be in one paragraph, right?

    Thanks for thinking this is unique. The thing about not-hearing is that it kind of rids the victim of speaking, too. I mean, they obviously can't hear themselves so they might be to shy or horrified to keep on talking... but we will see how Harry copes.

    Thanks again for pointing this out! I'll try to do my paragraphs right in the future and get rid of any grammar mistakes. :)


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