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Reviews For The Boy Who..?
Title: Chapter 3 11 Mar 2010 2:30 am
Reviewer: jolisgsd@gmail.com (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story so far! Well written. You seem to be keeping Snape in character and making Harry's conception plausible. The angst is certainly there. Poor Lily!! I also like your Harry. Not loved by the Dursleys, but he is accepting of that fact and rising above it as he did in canon.

    Again, great story. Hope you continue with it on a regular basis.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! Glad I'm succeeding at keeping people in-character.

    Next chapter underway - thanks for the R&R!

Title: Chapter 3 10 Mar 2010 8:48 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Most like is, dear. The timing alone proves that it is highly unlikely that Harry is anyone else's, unless you are suggesting that Lily was a...well, you get the point. Now the real questions is, are you going to try to find out for sure? And if he is, how will you make up for the awful way you have been treating Harry?

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Ah, but our dear Sev is stubborn, is he not?

    Thanks! ^^

     

     

Title: Chapter 3 10 Mar 2010 8:35 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    They need to find each other so harry can get out of that miserable house and they can both have love in their life. Great chapter, please post soon!

    Author's Response: Working on it. ;) Thanks for the R&R!
Title: Chapter 3 10 Mar 2010 6:15 am
Reviewer: KKJ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very interesting and exciting chapter. I like what shapes Harry's boggart took as well as how Snape contemplated Harry's moods and the possibility that he might be his father. I look forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! It took me awhile to figure out just what the boggart would become as Harry had yet to encounter a dementor, yet, so I'm glad it worked.

    Glad you're enjoying the tale so far - thanks for the reviews!

Title: Chapter 1 10 Mar 2010 5:53 am
Reviewer: KKJ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great set-up for the story. I like how you started with Lily and Severus, giving us a small portion of their background and then showed how Severus' foul mood impacted his grading of the Gryffindors' papers. I am very intrigued to see just what will be revealed in Lily's diary.
Title: Chapter 3 10 Mar 2010 5:24 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Love this story, and I can't wait to see what happens when Snape truly accepts the inevitable.

    Will Snape find a way to do a paternity potion. Love how you keep Snape in character by the way.

    Looking forward to more.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! As for Snape's means of 'verification', shall we say, I do believe it will prove more original than most - but I could be wrong.*shrug*

     

    Ta for the R&R. ^^

Title: Chapter 2 08 Mar 2010 12:19 am
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant story. Poor Sev the shock of having the Golden boy as his son *laughs*. Hope you update soon

    Author's Response: Like he doesn't have enough denial issues already, eh? ^^ Thanks for the R&R.
Title: Chapter 2 08 Mar 2010 12:12 am
Reviewer: Cicci Green (didnt feel like logging in) (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I LOVE your writing style!
    It's very elegant! Especially since a lot of fanfics are sloppily written and just... not so good... But even this is an overused plot you do it well.

    I look forward to the rest!

    Author's Response:

    *blush* Why, thank you!

    Looks like I won't be slacking, eh? ^^ Glad you're enjoying it so far - hope I can continue to please.

Title: Chapter 2 08 Mar 2010 12:06 am
Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Like it. You're doing a good job at putting your own spin on the story.

    Author's Response: Glad to hear it - thank you!
Title: Chapter 2 07 Mar 2010 10:10 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like that Snape's a jerk in this story, because quite frequently he's too OOC.

    Author's Response:

    Why, thank ya - I'm trying to keep him as in-character as possible.

    Thanks for the feedback!


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