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Title: Chapter 31 19 Dec 2012 6:15 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great ending thank you a wonderful chapter but why hadn't Remus smelt Peter on Ron?

    Author's Response:

    Excellent question. I've decided that rather than carry Scabbers around in his pocket as he frequently did in canon, Ron kept him safely in his cage most of the time and never took him to class in this story. Also, I imagine the elves clean student robes on a nightly basis, so although Peter would have ostensibly shed on Ron's clothing (I would assume), by the time Ron went to class the following day, they were clean again. Any other time, there would have been enough other conflicting scents that Remus missed it (ie: in the Great Hall) or assumed he was mistaken. Furthermore, Peter would know that Remus was at the school, as well, so I imagine he would also be avoiding him, knowing he'd be sniffed out.

    Thanks for the R&R!

Title: Chapter 31 17 Dec 2012 2:37 am
Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed) [Report This]
    Good job trying to show the growth in both of the boys. Poor Sirius.
Title: Chapter 31 16 Dec 2012 11:45 pm
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    Dun Dun Dun... I hope they don't just off and kill Sirius but give him a chance to speak. Of course he will talk negativly to Severus and cause a lot of problems but I hope they get wormtail and Sirius gets freed

    Author's Response:

    That would be a rather anticlimatic end for the guy, wouldn't it? :P Don't worry. Remus is still pretty clear-headed.

    Thanks for the R&R! 

Title: Chapter 31 16 Dec 2012 9:09 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no!!!

    Poor Sirius! I hope that they can clear up, but I hope that he accepts Snape as Harry's father also.

    Isn't it ironic that both Harry and Draco--enemies, are both protecting the big black dog.

    Great chapter, but another cliffie!! You naughty girl.

    Author's Response:

    I live for irony. <3 It's one of my favorite devices.

    *grins unrepentantly* Consider it payback? 

Title: Chapter 30 27 Nov 2012 7:04 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter! I liked that you have Goyle a learning disorder, i never seen that before.

    Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you like it.
Title: Chapter 30 27 Nov 2012 7:04 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter! I liked that you have Goyle a learning disorder, i never seen that before.
Title: Chapter 30 27 Nov 2012 7:04 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter! I liked that you have Goyle a learning disorder, i never seen that before.
Title: Chapter 30 27 Nov 2012 7:03 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter! I liked that you have Goyle a learning disorder, i never seen that before.
Title: Chapter 30 26 Nov 2012 3:56 am
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed) [Report This]
    Great job on this chapter! I really look forward to Harry getting some movement back in his fingers completely. Poor kid - it must be hell to not be able to do things. :(

    I hope that Harry and Draco can reconcile and get along, I think it would be good for the both of them.

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

    Author's Response:

    Yeah... I've picked on Harry quite a bit in this story, I'm afraid. He's turned into my whipping boy. :P I balance it out by picking on Ron in a different story, so I don't feel all that bad about it.

    Thanks for the R&R! 

Title: Chapter 30 24 Nov 2012 6:42 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for updating. I love how there relationship changes from formal to loving. The side story of Greg is so good and I think the fact that Sirius and Draco are getting close is a wonderful twist! Very clever

    Author's Response: You're most welcome--I just apologize for the terribly long delay. I'm glad you're enjoying the tale. I'm having a good time weaving all the threads together.

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