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Title: Consequences and Realizations 30 May 2010 5:17 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh gosh if my parents gave me that punishment, I'd go simply nuts and throw many many tantrums and fits and scream and who knows what else. I was a very dramatic child. This was a good addition to the series. :)
Title: Consequences and Realizations 26 Apr 2010 7:19 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    *snickers softly* That was worth it. Kudos on a job well done.
Title: Consequences and Realizations 24 Apr 2010 9:07 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    It was a nice addition! Thanks for sharing this!Mila
Title: Snape's Wrath 24 Apr 2010 9:02 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry!
Title: Consequences and Realizations 22 Apr 2010 9:53 pm
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    lol Good one!
Title: Consequences and Realizations 22 Apr 2010 9:47 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I am glad that Harry did learn his lesson, but I feel that the punishment's length was a bit too harsh. I am very uncomfortable with how humiliating it was. It is rarely a good thing to humiliate a teenager in front of his friends and schoolmates. It could have caused a great deal of resentment, because of the taunts that Harry was left vulnerable to by his father's very public punishment of him.
Title: Snape's Wrath 22 Apr 2010 3:26 am
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I loved the "king of insane punishments" line. Too funny.

    Sounds like a particularly awful, but appropriate punishment. Poor Harry....it's going to be a long week.
Title: Consequences and Realizations 22 Apr 2010 1:48 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent story!

    I felt so bad for Harry that must have been the worst punishment ever. I'm glad my parents were never that creative. *shudders*

    As I said amazing story. I'm glad Harry finially understands to think before he acts. Hopefully he'll remember that lesson when it counts.

    Excellent story. Never stop writing!
Title: Consequences and Realizations 21 Apr 2010 11:57 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovd it! I think Harry has finally learned what Severus wanted him to. Thank goodness! I loved the end too!
Title: Snape's Wrath 21 Apr 2010 11:52 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, I can't say Harry didn't deserve it. He did. I hope he learns his lesson. Great story! I loved the first one!

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