Great to see the next chapter on this. Nice touch that Harry is starting to realise it isn't all Snape's fault, and that he could have been paying more attention as well. Sounds like he might discover Potions is fun when you put some work into it, though that probably won't go down well with Ron. And throwing the Maurauders' Map into the mix ... *shakes head* evil, pure evil. :)
Glad to see you're pushing on with this - it's far too good to let lie. Looking forward to Harry's next tutoring session with Snape, though it's obviously going to take a long time for him to open up and at the moment Snape doesn't seem to be looking that closely. I wonder if it's going to require some kind of clue for him to get involved.
Awesome story. I can't wait for your next update.
Phew, that was close. The twins are going to get Harry in trouble eventually, aren't they?
Good chappie. Don't worry about the long wait. I know how RL can put a wrench in your best intentions.
Title: Tutoring
| 15 Mar 2011 5:27 am
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Reviewer: jolisgsd@gmail.com (Anonymous)
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Good chapter. It was nice to see that Harry is being more accepting of his fate to be in Slytherin. I liked the fact that Millicent befriended him.
I had to reread the story to remember things and I wondered why Snape allowed Draco to think that Harry had "sneaked" on him about the missing potions essay. Surely Snape knew that would happen. Did he really want the Slytherins to be angry at Harry? Rather ironic when he kept preaching to Harry to make a greater effort to get along with the Slyterins.
Title: Tutoring
| 15 Mar 2011 4:39 am
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Reviewer: aaprime (Anonymous)
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I am most definitely still here! thank you so much for updating. I really enjoy reading your work!
Title: Tutoring
| 15 Mar 2011 3:51 am
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Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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I completely forgot that I had read this story already until I had read half-way through the first chapter. I'm glad you have since updated. Please do so again soon. I love the way that you are writing Millicent. Can't wait for more!
Oh, what a suprice! Hope next chapter will be much sunner.
Back to buisness - I'm little supriced that Ron let up Harry language split so easily (other Slytherins), when I read it I would though t would take some time and arguing.
Hah, Mill is real Slytherins (no proof so bite me) and with sharp tongue. I like her :]
I am still here! Excellent update :D
Title: First Appointment with Snape
| 17 Feb 2011 5:13 pm
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Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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As it is the middle of the second month of 2011, please update! I love where you are going so far!
Title: The Mystery of the Missing Potions Essay
| 17 Feb 2011 4:53 pm
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Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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I like your story. But I was wondering why you only have Pansy, Millicent, and Daphne as the Slytherin girls in Harry's year. Tracey Davis and one other girl who has not been identified yet by J.K. Rowling are also in Slytherin.
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