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Title: The Mystery of the Missing Potions Essay 07 Dec 2010 8:03 pm
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    This is an awesome story. The Slytherins are acting like I thought they would act towards Harry. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! I'll do my best and update as soon as I can. Thanks for your review!
Title: The Mystery of the Missing Potions Essay 06 Dec 2010 1:43 am
Reviewer: charlie74656 (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmmm, after the last chapter when the Slytherins seemed to be much fairer and even-handed than a Gryffindor might expect, this seems like quite a change. I'll assume that Snape didn't like his Slytherins not supporting their housemate, not least because of the house division being aired in the potions class. I'm also guessing that Draco's punishment was more physical than Harry realises?

    Not sure how Snape's going to manage to persuade Harry to be more 'cunning'. As far as Harry's concerned he's minding his own business and standing up for his friends while the Slytherins aren't showing him any house loyalty. Looking forward to the meeting with Snape, but also the next lesson if Harry does work next to Neville. Good stuff again. :)

    Author's Response: Your guess about Draco's punishment is correct. As for the meeting with Snape, I'm looking forward to it too, so I'll try not to take too long before I update! Thanks for your detailed review!
Title: The Mystery of the Missing Potions Essay 05 Dec 2010 4:28 pm
Reviewer: fiction fan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Actually I think this is one of the better stories on the board right now. Wish you would update more often.
    This one seems less formulaic, and more kid centered. Snape doesn't have to adopt Harry to care for him.
    Bravo

    Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you like the story so far. "Wish you would update more often." - Me too :( 
Title: The Mystery of the Missing Potions Essay 05 Dec 2010 12:01 pm
Reviewer: Chuckle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So what will happen between Harry and Snape during the meeting? I bet that they will be discussing those failed tests. Can´t see Snape letting those pass without comment.
    And Malfoy who was lying on his stomach after his "talk" with Snape... Love your story and hope you'll update soon!

    Author's Response: So you picked up the hints about Malfoy - you were more perceptive than Harry then. Yep, the tests will definitely come up! Thanks for your review, I'm glad you like the story so far.
Title: The Mystery of the Missing Potions Essay 05 Dec 2010 7:37 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so glad that Snape believed Harry and knew that it was Malfoy. I feel bad for Harry though, that everyone believes that he snitched on Malfoy.

    Great job, and I'm anxious to know what happened with malfoy.

    Author's Response: Yes, Snape did a simple test: if Harry hadn't already done his homework he'd never have been able to write the essay so quickly. But yes, he put Harry in an awkward situation that way. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: The Mystery of the Missing Potions Essay 05 Dec 2010 6:06 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    Good story. Snape wasn't too cunning himself, was he? He should have known that the Slytherins would think that Harry "ratted" Malfoy out about the missing essay. Of course, perhaps Snape wants them to blame Harry. I doubt that he particarly wants Harry to be comfortable and happy with his Slytherins.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Snape does not really WANT them to think Harry ratted Draco out, but you are right, he didn't take care to prevent it. Although he takes his role as a head of house seriously (even with Harry), he is in a way satisfied that Harry has to struggle to be accepted (a fact that he would never admit, of course).
Title: The Mystery of the Missing Potions Essay 05 Dec 2010 12:39 am
Reviewer: Rileah (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Lovely story!! I hope to read some more soon! What will happen during harry's appointment with Snape????

    GOod job ;)

    Author's Response: Thanks for your review! Yes, the appointment will be next and I'll update as soon as I can.
Title: Facing Your Fears 22 Aug 2010 12:58 am
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter. I really love the subtleties in your writing, the little clues here and there which, while missed by Harry, make the writer very aware that there is much more to Slytherin than Harry thinks

    Author's Response: Thanks alot! Your review surely motivates me!
Title: First Evening 22 Aug 2010 12:38 am
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Really nice chapter; I'm intregued about Theo and Blaise. Poor Harry couldn't be blinder to the reason behind Severus' behaviour or his student's regard lol!

    Author's Response: Yes, Theo and Blaise were hardly mentioned in the books, so this gives me a little more freedom...
Title: Facing Your Fears 21 Aug 2010 9:37 pm
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter!

    i wonder what form Draco's Boggart would've taken? his father? would love to see his Boggart. maybe have him try to "outshine" harry, if/when he learns to produce a patronus?.

    can't wait for the next chapter.
    ~shannon

    Author's Response:

    To be honest, I haven't thought much about Draco's boggart, as I knew from the beginning he would decline. Apart from the fact that he surely loved to sabotage Lupin's lesson, what he said actually makes sense, I think: showing others your fear makes you vunerable, which certainly isn't a very Slytherin thing to do!

    Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked the chapter!


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