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Title: Facing Your Fears 21 Aug 2010 8:42 pm
Reviewer: Helen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Another amazing chapter... please update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try!
Title: Facing Your Fears 21 Aug 2010 8:30 pm
Reviewer: frodolove12 (Signed) [Report This]
    Loving it :D Please update soon ^^

    Author's Response: I'll do my best ;)
Title: Facing Your Fears 21 Aug 2010 8:02 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome. I love it! I l liked how harry noticed that Remus treated the Slytherins differently. I wonder if he will notice this also with the other teachers. I am enjoying all of your characterizations very much. The aquarium/lake window was very imaginative. I wonder if what Remus said was true, if Harry's classmates will be angry with him and if he will start loosing points accidentally. Thanks for the update! It was a great chapter!!

    Author's Response: So glad you liked it! About the aquarium: I thought it was unfair to have some students sleep in the dungeons without any light, and I couldn't imagine influential pureblood families like the Malfoys accept that unless there were other advantages...
Title: Facing Your Fears 21 Aug 2010 4:51 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw,poor Harry. I hope that things turn around for him. Glad that you've updated. Great chappie.

    Author's Response: Yes, poor Harry indeed! I'm afraid I cannot change everything for the better too quickly without it being unrealistic... Thanks for your feedback!
Title: First Evening 18 Aug 2010 3:15 am
Reviewer: Taryn (Signed) [Report This]
    oh no Harry!

    But soon things will be cool (I hope!) and this is an excellent story so far. I really like how he didn't rat Malfoy out. That was lovely.

    YAAAAY okay. Thank you for writing sir!

    Author's Response: Glad you like it! Well, we'll see how soon things will be cool! Thanks for reviewing!
Title: First Evening 16 Aug 2010 2:40 am
Reviewer: aaprime (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i just started reading this story, but i already know i'll love it! i stumbled upon it and it was a very pleasant surprise. a great idea, and i can't wait to find out the dynamics of the slytherin house!!! i look forward to the next chapter =)

    Author's Response: Glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing!
Title: First Evening 10 Aug 2010 5:16 pm
Reviewer: charlie74656 (Signed) [Report This]
    Just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying your story. I love stories that show how much care Snape puts into looking after his snakes and how Harry benefits just from the way ordinary Slytherins are treated.

    You're doing a great job with Harry's pov where he's still wary of Snape but starting to see that Snape will in fact be looking out for him and I'm really enjoying that. I can easily see this sliding gradually into his really trusting the man. Also, I'm looking forward to Snape's keen eye noticing that Harry's not the arrogant spoiled brat he's always assumed.

    I have to say that so far all your characters feel so close to canon - and yet a step sideways, if that makes any sense. They're really reacting and behaving and speaking very much as in canon, and yet you're giving us that little bit extra underneath that's letting this go in the direction that canon never did. Wonderful job. I'm really looking forward to more of this. Hope your muse is going to be a bit easier on you in future, coz this is just hitting all my mentor!Snape buttons. :)

    Author's Response: Thanks for your review! Yes, I definitely see Snape as a dedicated Head of House. I was happy to read that you found my characters close to canon - it's always my aim to achieve that and I always wonder if I succeeded. About my muse - yes, I hope so, too!
Title: First Evening 10 Aug 2010 9:19 am
Reviewer: orpheneritus (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad you have continued on, I did wonder what had happened. I understand how this could be a difficult chapter! So I hope that once over the hump the updates will be a little more regular. You've dropped some hints about the Slytherin personalities. Interesting that Draco didn't have any personal items out.

    Author's Response:

    "Interesting that Draco didn't have any personal items out."- interesting that you read it that way! I mean, I certainly wrote it that way but I hadn't thought about it like that. What I wanted to show was merely that in spite of the overly rich background (most expensive trunk in the room) there is still something normal about him (Quidditch poster).

    Thanks for reviewing and sharing your thoughts with me!

Title: First Evening 09 Aug 2010 12:21 pm
Reviewer: Valin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    love it! keep it uo!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try!
Title: First Evening 08 Aug 2010 10:50 pm
Reviewer: jenny-in-uk (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story so far, and I can't wait to read more. Convincing portrayal and quality writing. Thanks

    Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it!

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