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Reviews For On the Other Side
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try!
Author's Response: I'll do my best ;)
Author's Response: So glad you liked it! About the aquarium: I thought it was unfair to have some students sleep in the dungeons without any light, and I couldn't imagine influential pureblood families like the Malfoys accept that unless there were other advantages...
Author's Response: Yes, poor Harry indeed! I'm afraid I cannot change everything for the better too quickly without it being unrealistic... Thanks for your feedback!
But soon things will be cool (I hope!) and this is an excellent story so far. I really like how he didn't rat Malfoy out. That was lovely. YAAAAY okay. Thank you for writing sir! Author's Response: Glad you like it! Well, we'll see how soon things will be cool! Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing!
You're doing a great job with Harry's pov where he's still wary of Snape but starting to see that Snape will in fact be looking out for him and I'm really enjoying that. I can easily see this sliding gradually into his really trusting the man. Also, I'm looking forward to Snape's keen eye noticing that Harry's not the arrogant spoiled brat he's always assumed. I have to say that so far all your characters feel so close to canon - and yet a step sideways, if that makes any sense. They're really reacting and behaving and speaking very much as in canon, and yet you're giving us that little bit extra underneath that's letting this go in the direction that canon never did. Wonderful job. I'm really looking forward to more of this. Hope your muse is going to be a bit easier on you in future, coz this is just hitting all my mentor!Snape buttons. :) Author's Response: Thanks for your review! Yes, I definitely see Snape as a dedicated Head of House. I was happy to read that you found my characters close to canon - it's always my aim to achieve that and I always wonder if I succeeded. About my muse - yes, I hope so, too!
Author's Response: "Interesting that Draco didn't have any personal items out."- interesting that you read it that way! I mean, I certainly wrote it that way but I hadn't thought about it like that. What I wanted to show was merely that in spite of the overly rich background (most expensive trunk in the room) there is still something normal about him (Quidditch poster). Thanks for reviewing and sharing your thoughts with me!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try!
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