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Author's Response: Thanxxx!! Long time since I received a reveiw. I will write as soon as I get more time. Yes, there will be lots of accidental magic....in places where u'll never guess!;-) Thanks again!
Author's Response: You're right. I had been in a hurry and well - err is to human - so u've 2 forgive me 4 that. Excuse the mistake. Glad u liked it neways!!:-)
Author's Response: Thank u very much. Yeah, I'm waiting for the Durlseys to get theirs back too. Next chap in a few days, then!
Author's Response: Yes, I am using notepad bcoz HTML script takes a hell lot of time. And also it is my first time thta I submitted stories newhere. And I c that u surf this story pretty often! And I'm a bit new to all this, as I have just sai. Read my bio, will u??
It would help a lot if you formated it by adding spaces. It'll make it a lot easier to read and much more attractive to the audience You did better than me though, in some aspects. In my 1st fanfic, I had 3 grammar mistakes in the 1st 3 lines, and really silly mistakes too. Best of luck with your fic Author's Response: I have increased the spaces, as u will see when u open the text one more time.
I liked the beginning of the story, especially where Severus and Albus were talking. I haven't read any other stories where Severus directly says those things, which I believe he must have been thinking. One small correction, in formatting: could you please put a blank line between each paragraph? The way you have it, in one large block of text, makes it very hard to read. Author's Response: I have increased the spaces as u pointed out, as u r going 2 see when u click it again. |
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