This is one of my all time favorite fan fictions! It looks like you are still writing - any hope that you might pick up this one again (or some of your other unfinished stories)?
HUGE FAN
My_patronus_is_a_dinosaur
I feel like I've reviewed for this chapter already but I really enjoy this story and I hope you haven't given up on it! I really enjoy the interactions between the two.
I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. When are you planning on updating? (Hope I don't sound too nosy)
More please!
I've really enjoyed this story. I have two handicapped sons and have pondered how children with physical and mental handicaps are handled in the Wizarding World. I like very much how you've developed the relationship between Severus and Harry in this, and your deviations from canon aren't distracting at all, but enhance the tale.
Things I'd like to see... hmmmm. Well, depending on how long the story is (is it going to end at the end of First Year, or go into the summer and Second Year?), I think it would be nice to see Severus working with Harry a bit on non-scholastic information about living in the Wizarding World. As you've pointed out in other tales, Although technically, he's a full wizard as both of his parents were magical, he has been culturally deprived, and I think it would be neat to see him experiencing other wizarding culture things besides Quidditch. Art or music concerts or even theatre (professional or amateur), things like that. How about Wizarding fictional novels for entertainment instead of non-fiction books? Maybe Severus gets tired of Harry's scrawl and gets him proper penmanship lessions with the quill...
In any case, whether you use my ideas or not, I wanted to be sure that you know that you've got a terrific tale here, and I would dearly love to see it finished.
Well done!
Author's Response: It will definitely be finished. I never abandon my tales here. I've just been distracted with my other stories and haven't thought on this one for a while. Thanks for the ideas and the review!
i stutter when i'm excited or angry too. I've never really been able to rid myself of it. even with speech therapy. if i can help, let me know!
Author's Response: How am I doing with the story? I've known a few people in my life who have had a stutter, but that was all a long time ago. Is Harry's stuttering and his emotions about it realistic?
| Title: Hagrid's Pets
| 17 Jun 2011 1:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Anonymous)
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Wow...absolutely brilliant story! But it did see a little as if both of Hermione and Ron, got off easier than either Harry or Draco. I can't wait to find out just what Severus will have to say or how he'll punish both boys?
| Title: Christmas
| 17 Jun 2011 12:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Anonymous)
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Awesome story, definitely a favorite for me, to which I can hardly wait to read more.
Severus, almost seemed pleased about the way that he spent christmas with Harry. Undoubtably once he returns to hogwarts I do hope he won't try to push Harry away out of fear!
| Title: Hagrid's Pets
| 18 May 2011 8:14 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story - I hope you're able to continue it!!!!
I'm liking this story! I find Snape's role interesting, and Harry's stutter a nice twist... Update soon!
KCK-Lumcer
Love this story - read it through again today. Well developed... Hope you continue it.
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