Reviews For A Fair Advantage
I love the developing relationship between Snape and Potter. I would like to see Snape tutoring Potter some more, maybe in defence? maybe in potions?
I would also like to see the rest of teh 1st year events and how they may have been different with Potter more trusting of Snape - however you want to play that! - and I wonder if Snape will find out that Quirrel's gaze hurts Harry's scar and make the connection?
One thing I would NOT like to see is Harry and Draco making friends, so many fanfics have that, it is really overdone, it's usually not believable (with a few exceptions like AYLNO) and in this fic Draco works so well as a mean antagonist making fun of Harry's stutter. I WOULD like to see Snape having to deal with conflicting loyalties/obligations over Draco and Harry's antagonism.
Really enjoy this fic, thanks for writing it and sharing!
Author's Response: I have things laid out up to the end of this story and some planned for the sequel. In this story you will not see Harry in Wendron again. But fear not, there will be good Harry/Severus interaction.
Author's Response: Romance wasn't on the agenda. Harry is only eleven. Those teenage hormones start rearing their heads about this time, but I don't like to do the romance between eleven year old when I write. And he's only met Ginny the one time at the train station.
PS: Looking forward to Snape's reaction to the truth about Harry's home life!
I always enjoy scenarios where there is misunderstanding between harry and snape - whether it be snape thinks harry is the culprit of a misdeed or harry not understanding something snape says
Wonderful story-I just found it and I'm looking forward to "what's next"
Thanks for the enjoyable read.
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