I love this story so much!
This was my second re-read of it, and I have to say that my mental image of little Harry turning into a bear cub still makes me smile. (In fact, when I saw the movie BRAVE, my first thought on seeing the triplets as cubs was that they looked like Bear!Harry! LOL!)
And thank you for giving Albus and Ariana a happy ending too. I got so irked with him in canon, but also felt sorry for him, because of the consequences of the terrible choices that he made. I admit that I'd love to have seen the scene where Albus took Ariana to meet Abeforth. I would hope that the two men were able to reconcile their differences, or at least apologize to each other and offer forgiveness, so she could have them both in her family.
Well done!
That epilogue was awesome - I love that Harry has finally become a confident person but still loves Severus to bits even though he's so much older now! It's nice to see Harry not being frightened of the slightest thing anymore! Can't wait to read the sequel :)
Author's Response: And thanks for the reviews! *squishes you*
I like the way you combined the Albus-Ariana story with the Harry-Severus story - very cleverly done!
Author's Response: Thanks muchly! Glad you liked! Some didn't. *shrugs*
Haha I loved that list of punishments you came up with for the Dursleys - even though they seem insignificant on their own, altogether that would be an absolute nightmare!
Well at least Minerva had good intentions! Albus, however...
Captain was a cute name choice hehe! Oh dear, Minerva is a bit silly for her reaction, can't wait to see what happens!
Yayy, Minerva will definitely stick up for Harry and Severus!
Had to come and read this after I'd read your fest entry! Loving it so far, they're adorable together :)
I loved it! It was so sweet!
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