| Title: Hold This Please
| 12 Aug 2010 12:57 am
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| Reviewer: Ash (Signed)
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Love the story so far but I am not entirely sure how it suddenly jumped to little Harry being a potions genius and a rather bratty child at that too? Figuring out that the boy put the wrong number of roots in is perfectly sound, and advanced enough but the rest is stretching it quite a bit - third year potion, slicing and dicing, knowing which ingredient would help out i.e. reactions between them etc, etc, etc. Also he went from timid to quite assertive and downright rude really. The whole - you're stupid - deal was not cute.
Then having a child in a potions classroom is not something I'd see Severus, and this one too, doing as it's a very volatile environment, not to mention his son just jumping into a lesson like that is incredibly unprofessional. Anyway, still love the story but a little more realism is more to my liking.
Author's Response: Oh ye of little faith . . .
Hah! Harry is a little genius! He could be a little nicer ... but he's tiny, and look at his role model. And ... well ... he's kinda cute like that. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Title: A Small Touch of Revenge
| 10 Aug 2010 11:26 am
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| Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous)
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Fantastic! Please write more, can't wait for the next installment!
Author's Response: Getting there. Just had a couple of real life crises that I had to attend to first. In one week, I took my friend to the ER, had an old friend die, and had to take my dog to the pet ER.
Go Minerva and Poppy! LOL are yo sure they weren't both in Slytherin! great chapter! can't wait for more.
~Shannon
Author's Response: Actually in another one of my stories (over at FF.net), Poppy WAS in Slytherin . . .
Love it! I am totally enjoying this story. Much fun. I figured I should mention, though. 'twat' is a REALLY nasty word. I don't mind, but it's a lot stronger than you've used yet, so I figured I'd warn you. :0)
Author's Response: Yeah well, that's how Poppy felt about her. :)
| Title: A Small Touch of Revenge
| 04 Aug 2010 10:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed)
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OMG that was awesome! I loved it!!!!
They were wonderfully vindictive! I do hope that the Dursleys 'enjoy' their new lives. :D
OMG those problems would suck to have-Dursleys deserve it all! Please continue! Oh and have Harry please have more loads of accidental magic-powerful-accidental magic incidents!!!
*tee-hee* Way too funny. Any one of those curses would be enough to drive them batty, but all of them? And following them no matter where they might move? Priceless.
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