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Reviews For Witches Promise
Title: Witches Promise 12 Jul 2023 3:11 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you, random box.
    This was lovely.

    Author's Response: Thanks!

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Title: Witches Promise 27 Sep 2022 4:57 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely story. Thank you.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Witches Promise 23 Aug 2016 9:35 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved this, it's nice to see Severus as he was but more at peace with things :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  There are two sequels that deal with Severus and Bette's courtship in a much more adult manner on Ao3.
Title: Witches Promise 09 Mar 2012 12:26 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Love this although there is very little sea at Blackpool just sand!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much.
Title: Witches Promise 28 Jul 2011 10:39 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful story! If only Sev could have had this happy ending... I really liked how this was written and the character interaction :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much.  I really wanted Snape to have a happy ending.  I know exactly what you mean.

     T

Title: Witches Promise 13 Aug 2010 5:32 am
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    D'awh. That's cute. I like it.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks.

     T

Title: Witches Promise 19 Jul 2010 2:02 pm
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    This was quite a story. Strangely enough, I found it realistic and believable for a piece set in a fantasy world. Not the usual bouts of foolish wand waving, just the slower, more natural magic of healing through work, good intent, and love. Quite nicely done. Thank you.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review.  I kind of like Severus healing without the aid of magic simply because it was magic that damaged him his whole life. I would think that he needs a little rest after what he went through. 

     T

Title: Witches Promise 17 Jul 2010 6:20 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was a great story. I loved the way you wrote Snape and I loved Ginny's comment about Harry not being unbreakable. Your Harr is perfect as well. Wonderful story. I really enjoyed it.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much.  I really enjoyed writing Snape with more of an edge to him than I've done before.  Harry's anger is justified, but I could leave them at odds. It would be out of character for him not to want to fix things with Snape, given what he knows.    I'm glad you liked Ginny's comment.  Snape never recognised that Harry wasn't his father, or that he could be hurt by Snape's more than casual cruelty. 

    Thanks for the review.

    T

     

Title: Witches Promise 14 Jul 2010 11:56 am
Reviewer: mayatrau (Signed) [Report This]
    the story is wonderfull. Im don't usually like short stories but this one is really good.. Snape is a bit ooc but I get that it's probably because of what he went thrue...

    Author's Response:

    I don't know where you get that Snape is OOC,  He isn't. I tried very hard to keep him in character by not making him soften with the years. He is a grumpy old sod and a bitter bastard, and not at all soft and fuzzy.  These are two unfortunate traits most writers tend to wgive him when he has a change of heart with Harry.

    Yours is also the first review to say he is out of character.

    Thanks for your review.

    T

     

Title: Witches Promise 10 Jul 2010 6:42 pm
Reviewer: orpheneritus (Signed) [Report This]
    Gosh! I loved it, I just loved it. Every little detail. I loved Bette and her relationship with Severus. From the second part I was thinking, I hope they have a baby. Adore it am favourite-ing (really the English language requires a new verb here) it, and I'm sure I'll be rereading it in the near future.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much for your kindness.  I'm glad you liked it.  I always try to give our Potions Master a happy ending, even if it does involve children.

     T


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