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Title: Death Walk 11 Oct 2020 5:32 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story thank you so much
Title: Death Walk 13 Aug 2012 10:25 pm
Reviewer: Libitina (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is really amazing. It's unbeliviable that it is your first one because this story is really well written!
    *adds the story to favourites*

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading an reviewing my story. I've written more, since this and I still can't believe this was my first. I ha e to give credit to my lovely beta reader for her input.
Title: Death Walk 14 May 2011 12:10 pm
Reviewer: Zireael07 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this fic, the idea is brilliant. The parting words are the cream on the cake...

    Author's Response: thank you.  the ending words were what made this story.
Title: Death Walk 07 Feb 2011 9:50 am
Reviewer: EspadaInMyCloset (Signed) [Report This]
    I wish Snape really had come up...come on, J.K. Rowling, you knew better then to leave him out...!!! *pouts*

    Author's Response: i feel the same way. thanks for reading and reviewing.
Title: Death Walk 08 Dec 2010 4:06 am
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    OH HOW AWESOME! I'm crying now, THANKS! But really, this is a really good story, I wish it happened this way in canon, well,that is, if Snape REALLY had to die in the first place. I loved the last line, Snape kept calling him Potter until Harry could not hear. I always knew Snape had a heart! Great job!

    Author's Response: *Blushes* thanks Aut! i too wish that Snape apeared to Harry in Canon. Or that He lived. but i guess thats what FanFiction is for, Right! im glad you liked it!
Title: Death Walk 19 Jul 2010 10:57 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked this! Mila

    Author's Response: i so glad you liked it! i loved writing it!
Title: Death Walk 19 Jul 2010 9:21 pm
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked this story; I generally like it when Severus and Harry finally reach some kind of mutual positive understanding. You did a nice job, especially the line 'It took more bravery than any Gryffindor in the history of Hogwarts to play the role of double agent so well,' as it's so true.

    My one suggestion would be that lines 12 & 13 be combined, as all the dialog before and after those lines are alternating speakers. Although it's Harry saying both those lines, we initially think it's Snape saying "Which brings me back...I didn't want you to die." 'Huh? Oh--it's still HARRY', we think to ourselves. As readers, we stumble, since you've got the separate line AND the separate quotes, which is why we don't realize it's Harry still speaking. Move "Which brings me back..." to the previous line right after "Oh wait, you can't because you're dead," and the story will be perfect. A "10" for you.

    Author's Response:

    im so glad you like my story. and thanks for catching that mistake for me! i didn't even notice it. i fixed it now.

Title: Death Walk 17 Jul 2010 4:33 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was sad. But I enjoy the sad, sometimes. I liked the feel of the story. It was well written. Thanks!

    Author's Response: thanks Tabith! im glad you like it! i hope i did your Challenge justice! LOL
Title: Death Walk 17 Jul 2010 12:05 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh. Rather light-hearted, their teasing, considering Harry's about to die. But then, I guess you'd do anything to avoid thinking about what's to come, so it's sort of understandable.

    Nicely done.

    Author's Response:

    that's exactly why i kept the Snark and teasing light hearted.  and because knowing the two of them they'd be so "weirded out" showing their feeling to each other that they'd need the Banter back and forth to show some sort of Normalacy.

Title: Death Walk 14 Jul 2010 4:02 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story!

    I love the ending where Harry calls Snape a Gryffindor. I can just imagine the look on Snape's face and Harry's smirk as he takes off into the clearing.

    An excellent short story, and I hope you write more.

    Author's Response: that line was the Hardest of me to write actually! it made me cry!LOL im sure if Snape could, he would've Hexed Harry for that comment!LOL

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