This was a fantastic read well done! Write on!
Great, original, and sweet. I liked the hity about Snape's past.
That threw me for a loop, once I'd figured out it wasn't James Potter, I thought for sure it was going to be Regulus Black!
Author's Response: Lol, I hadn't considdered either of those possibilities.
Interessting and nice, but also sad.
this is a great story. very interesting!
| Title: Not Him Either
| 29 Dec 2010 11:18 am
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| Reviewer: Oakleaf (Anonymous)
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This is a great story.
I really enjoyed how this has been written.
Well done.
This was excellent. Joshua was a nice original character - I think it was nice to see Snape with a real friend for once. It was a shame that Joshua couldn't stay longer with Snape, but it was more like 'real' life I suppose. In the fantasy sense of course.
Having 'lemon drops' as the cover up word was a humourous touch too. I was quite surprised at the slytherin password also being lemon drops!
The quidditch pitch was quite interesting - slightly eerie.
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