Excellent story and nice characterisation. Cheers
J
This story was short, but it conveyed a lot. I loved it!
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| 10 Aug 2010 5:08 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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This is one of those stories where you just sit back and sigh at the end. Well done. Well written.
| Title: A Place and Season
| 10 Aug 2010 4:50 am
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| Reviewer: ann (Anonymous)
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| Title: A Place and Season
| 10 Aug 2010 2:49 am
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| Reviewer: Severa (Signed)
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You did so much in just five chapters! Interesting story, great character development, and a very realistic representation of shock. You definitely left me wanting more, but I am sure that was your intention. Sometimes stories shouldn't be neatly concluded. This is going on my favorites list!
AND... I want to know what Harry didn't tell Snape about his new powers!
"I can see that you already have."
Amazing. Really. This might be one of my favorite conversations between Harry and Snape
That was, again, an excellent chapter. Snape seems very much in character, or at least this is how I would imagine him to act in this situation. Loving it!
I love how you wrote this story, especially with Harry asking Snape to be at his wedding. It's nice that Snape helped Harry remember who he is.
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