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Reviews For The Long Walk Home
Title: A Time and Reason 10 Aug 2010 2:08 am
Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice use of psychology with this chapter. Hopefully, Harry figures out his purpose. :D Excellent chapter.
Title: A Place and Season 10 Aug 2010 2:06 am
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful ficlet: thoroughly enjoyable, well written and poignant.
Title: Old Wounds 10 Aug 2010 2:04 am
Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter. I liked your inclusion of this line "You have spent the last 14 months punishing yourself for something beyond your control, have you not?" One could say the same thing about Snape.
Title: Familiar Faces 10 Aug 2010 1:58 am
Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how you show the changes to all three of them. Hints of their past selves are still there like when Draco says "you're not dead yet." You keep them very consistent and in character.
Title: A Walk Alone 10 Aug 2010 1:51 am
Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed) [Report This]
    I like it so far. I especially like you adding some of the lyrics from the song in this story. You can definitely hear the song playing the background. Awesome chapter. :D
Title: A Time and Reason 10 Aug 2010 1:45 am
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter; I love the complexity behind Snape and Harry's interactions and the other, as yet unseen, characters' backstory. (p.s. in the UK, 'Jello' is called 'Jelly')
Title: A Place and Season 10 Aug 2010 12:36 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A highly enjoyable read and even though I wanted more it was a fitting end to the story.

    Author's Response:

    I think I rather enjoy writing in such a way that leaves readers satisfied but still wanting more.  I like to leave the ending up to the reader's imagination, thinking, I wonder what happened in their lives next?  Personally for this story I envisioned Draco or Snape even becoming a godparent to Harry and Ginny's children since Ron is already their uncle.  But I thought it a better ending to end with the thought of the wedding ahead.

     

    Thanks everybody for the reviews! 

Title: A Place and Season 10 Aug 2010 12:10 am
Reviewer: Susana (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Such a lovely ending! Thanks so much for writing!
Title: A Place and Season 10 Aug 2010 12:07 am
Reviewer: Rachel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    really good. i enjoyed it a lot.
Title: Old Wounds 09 Aug 2010 11:26 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter; I really like where you're going with this plot and the interaction between the characters feels so natural and believable.

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